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Come With Me
on: July 05, 2019, 22:24:52
I wrote this one in about half an hour (maybe you can tell? lol) but to me it's probably one of my strongest songs yet, definitely more of a rock element to it. There's even a little guitar solo of sorts at the end! Please let me know what you think :)

Walk into the room like i'm Liam G
Playing my tunes like i'm Gerry C
Underneath the sky of a Courteeners flare
I love how it shines on your golden hair

Are you coming
Are you coming with me
Hold on now darling
You're coming with me

No they'll never
Make a monkey out of me
All i'm asking is
For you to believe
And if all I have is this moment right now
I'm singing the blues
Before I go down



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Re: Come With Me
Reply #1 on: July 06, 2019, 20:31:06
I think the quick writing is a sign of your growing confidence @realkevm and that you think 'Yes this is something, let me get this down'  ::thumb::

I like the ohhh yeah's at the beginning, again a sign of your confidence, using your voice as an additional instrument.

The electric guitar adds a nice additional element but needs to just sit better in a full track.

Good Job

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Re: Come With Me
Reply #2 on: July 06, 2019, 22:06:35
Cheers Mr B, appreciated! Yeah when I do a more finished version definitely making the lead guitar sit better, I noticed that too. More hand claps and some bass too :)


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Reply #3 on: July 07, 2019, 18:56:38
@realkevm this has a really cool sound and energy to it. Love the melody, and the intro is catchy right at the start. It made me want to hear more, as does the build throughout. Great melody! I agree with @MrBouzouki spot on. I think this is a great tune. Also, I think your vocals are getting better!  :pompom:
Do what makes your heart sing :)


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Re: Come With Me
Reply #4 on: July 07, 2019, 22:29:37
Thanks so much @Kellyanneg !!


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Re: Come With Me
Reply #5 on: July 15, 2019, 14:50:55
I played this live for the first time yesterday, I ended up doing it a bit fast but i'd love to hear what you think to it



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Re: Come With Me
Reply #6 on: September 13, 2019, 22:20:45
Hi here's a slowed down acoustic version, what do you think? It#s one of my favourite songs to play


Re: Come With Me
Reply #7 on: September 13, 2019, 22:47:43
A fan of Liam Gallaghers??
Iím an admirer. Iíve written a few songs with him in mind.
I thought musically your song is spot on and the melody is catchy. The vocals need a bit more work but hey Iím not the greatest singer.
Looking forward to hearing more stuff from yourself.


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Re: Come With Me
Reply #8 on: September 13, 2019, 22:57:58
Cheers Matt, yeah big fan of Oasis/Liam. Also mention Gerry Cinnamon and Courteeners in the song too :) Yeah vocals aren't perfect still a struggle for me :) Thanks for having a listen dude


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Re: Come With Me
Reply #9 on: September 14, 2019, 13:57:25
Hi there, you didnít know it, but Iím you brand new manager.
No, just kidding of course.
I like this one a lot.
A whole lot.
You might as well have found your language, musically speaking.
Itís light hearted, catchy as hell and recognizable. What not to love? Maybe 2í27Ē is a bit short for my taste.

Some more of these and youíve got yourself a fan club.
Kind regards, Gus


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Re: Come With Me
Reply #10 on: September 14, 2019, 22:25:11
Wow @LePlongeur thanks so much man. I really appreciate it Gus thank you!!


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Re: Come With Me
Reply #11 on: September 25, 2019, 22:15:23
Hey here's a latest demo version of this, it's probably my favourite song and this is a lot closer to how I want it to sound