• Coming Home - Second Version
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Coming Home - Second Version
on: October 20, 2016, 11:31:57
Hi all,

I got some good feedback on my track Coming Home and have this different version.  Some of you complained about the repetition of a particular guitar sound.  I have this updated version minus that repetition. 

https://soundcloud.com/jezmund-2/coming-home-1

So weíre talking again
Sure beats silent scorn
Thatís how Iíve been living
Since the day I was born
I donít want to live that way anymore

We were drawn to each other
But the light had gone dead
Thatís how things can work out
How they can work out in my head
Now Iím think thereís so much I misread

I donít ever want to say that
Iíll could make it on my own
So Iím glad weíre talking
And you are saying that you are coming home

The smile of a pretender
Who liked to take things slow
Is but a weary recollection
From many years ago
Thatís what I need you to know


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Re: Coming Home - Second Version
Reply #1 on: October 20, 2016, 11:55:54
Nice feel to this song @Andrew Jezmund - I like the words as well

I like your voice at around 3 mins where there's less accompaniment.

cheers


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Re: Coming Home - Second Version
Reply #2 on: October 20, 2016, 13:19:25
Hey Andrew,

just listened to your song. Must admit that country is not really my kind of music - BUT I sense that you pretty much nailed what that kind of genre wants. Both in the type of production setup as well as the modern "Home coming" lyrics.
So you get Karma for this country classic.


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Re: Coming Home - Second Version
Reply #3 on: October 20, 2016, 20:06:54
 ::thumb:: ::thumb:: ::thumb::

lovely song!
me, myself, and Pie


Re: Coming Home - Second Version
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Re: Coming Home - Second Version
Reply #5 on: October 21, 2016, 00:09:57
Very nice! I like the lyrics and the mix sounds quite good!The piano solo is a nice touch.
Bill
Songwriter, Keyboards, Arranger, Producer & Engineer for November Sound

November Sound is based on the Mother, Father & Son musical trio of Melissa, Bill & Will. I'm the father so anything I post will have my wife singing and/or my son playing percussion.


Re: Coming Home - Second Version
Reply #6 on: October 21, 2016, 11:21:43
Hi @Andrew Jezmund - I'm getting a "track not found" when I try and access this - can you look at the link?




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