• Days of Love and Roses
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Days of Love and Roses
on: September 02, 2018, 13:00:19
A new version of one of my oldies.

https://soundcloud.com/steve-gray-songwriting/days-of-love-and-roses

The conflict now is over
And only I am free
There is nothing left to bind me
But memories, reminding me
That I must go out and find
Somebody else to sympathise with me
 I must go out and find another girl

The loneliest days are ended
And all thoughts of love are gone
I have counted up my losses
And find I can go on if I can find
Somebody else to sympathise with me
I must go on out and find another girl

Days of love and roses, coffee, unmade skies
Are all very fine
But when they go, they leave a bitter taste
Like the remenance of fine wine

And so, I have made my mind up
To leave some truth behind
Although I may hurt somebody
I'll not try to be unkind when I find
Somebody else who can sympathise with me
Then I'll go on out and find another girl
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Re: Days of Love and Roses
Reply #1 on: September 02, 2018, 21:15:48
very nice song @redmando  ::thumb:: ::thumb:: ::thumb::

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Re: Days of Love and Roses
Reply #2 on: September 03, 2018, 00:41:16
Hey Steve @redmando ,

It must be ages since I heard a song from you! And I'm glad you posted this one. I enjoyed it very much! ::headphone::

Cheers,
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Re: Days of Love and Roses
Reply #3 on: September 03, 2018, 09:12:00
« Last Edit: September 03, 2018, 09:54:26 by MrBouzouki »
I enjoyed this @redmando

It's one of those odd songs where the initial instrumentation and tempo suggest a positive upbeat song that is then countered by the lyric.
Even the obviously minor sections sound hopeful so this dichotomy is interesting to my ears. I guess the subject of the song is about moving on and  getting over a negative experience and  so in that way the mood is correct.

Are you using SUS chords at times ? It sounds like it and it's a particular stylistic thing that pops up in my acoustic playing too.

It's good to revisit some old songs. I have books full of them that I need to start working though at some point.

Nice job overall

 ::OSMAN:: ::OSMAN:: ::OSMAN::

Addendum

Well it's catchy too. I just went downstairs to make a cuppa and I was singing the melody as I busy doing stuff.




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Re: Days of Love and Roses
Reply #4 on: September 03, 2018, 11:41:16
Thanks for listening @Dutchbeat , @Mark Luto  and @MrBouzouki .

I think I passed the Mr Bouzouki Whistle Test? I appreciate your summation of the song - I hadn't really thought about it much since it was written -  but you have got it spot on.

Again, I hadn't thought about the chords too much either. When I wrote it I didn't know any music theory, so just made the shapes up. Looking at it now, the riff just descends down down the neck with a made-up shape (9th fret 4th string, 8th on 3rd, 7 on 2nd and 9 on top) - so I think it is Bsus2, Asus2, Gsus2  then F.

In my recent songwriting I tend to use (overuse?) the open Asus2 a lot on both guitar and dulcimer - it's got a lovely ring to it. Dsus2 it nice too.

Get your old songbooks back out @MrBouzouki  - you never know what gems you might redicover.


Re: Days of Love and Roses
Reply #5 on: September 04, 2018, 23:56:26
Sounds wonderful. I get a bit of a Cure meet early Pink Floyd vibe...
Liking the break around 2.18 - though something seems odd in the beat there.
recommending https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/How_Music_Works "How music works", book by David Byrne.


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Re: Days of Love and Roses
Reply #6 on: September 05, 2018, 04:11:36
@redmando

cool song man. I like the guitar and your lyrics.


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Re: Days of Love and Roses
Reply #7 on: September 09, 2018, 15:04:21
Thanks for your comments @Neal and @oorlab . Yeah, my drum programming takes a few wrong turns at times but in this case I think it makes for a quirky little hook. One day I will learn to drum properly (!).


Re: Days of Love and Roses
Reply #8 on: September 09, 2018, 19:02:18
I love it @redmando ! It's so groovy! ( wait is that what they said back in the 70's  ???   ... if not then get down with your bad self..... ::)  ... actually I'm thinking my commentary is falling apart here ....   :) ...  ) Anyway, it's cool.

I'm digging this going back to the future thing. Go back to an old song, fix it up and re-release it in modern times knowing now what you didn't know then.

Cool little guitar hook! And, the actually song makes for a surprise for me.... with the title I was imagining a "Days of Wine and Roses" nostalgic jazzy kind of thing. But, no, it has more of a "move on from the bad experiences of the past" kind of message.

Good show.

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November Sound is based on the Mother, Father & Son musical trio of Melissa, Bill & Will. I'm the father so anything I post will have my wife singing and/or my son playing percussion.


Re: Days of Love and Roses
Reply #9 on: September 09, 2018, 20:05:07
Hi @redmando ,

yes, a lot of 70s vibes here in this song. Sounds very good on my laptop speakers. The guitar sometimes is not 100% w.r.t. the drums in case you care ;-)

Best!

Fabian


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Re: Days of Love and Roses
Reply #10 on: September 09, 2018, 22:39:37
Thanks for your listening and comments @Bill from November Sound  and @junemay - I'll give the guitar / drums sync another listen, thanks for letting me know. I may have to sack the drummer - oh, that's me.  ???



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