deeper funk of blue

Well I wrote this quite quickly
It seems to be a love song of sorts, inspired by m'lady

constructive Feedback would be nice, destructive feedback would be something else entirely. lol.

link

https://soundcloud.com/2rightly/deeper-funk-of-blue

lyrics

deeper funk of blue
 


honey, you've got that voodoo
'can hardly take my eyes off o' you
'feeling like I could move a mountain
with y' here in this deeper funk of blue

it's funny you just say the word
the ticking of the clock does sound absurd
I can finally hear the voice of nature
asking me if I would have the nerve
giving all I get both night and day
working up a sweat to throw it away
 
promise me you'll never be dishonest
ev'ry distance bridged with your promise
left without I wear the crown of doubt
no schoolin' is foolin' me to want this
brighter lights are found in darker nights
let the fall precede the greater heights

here in this deeper
funk of blue


Rightly

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