Author Topic: Dreamtest  (Read 113 times)

0 Members and 1 Guest are viewing this topic.

Offline Matu

  • Vegetable Chef
  • *
  • Posts: 31
  • Karma coins: 18
  • 21 year old Singer Songwriter from Argentina
Dreamtest
« on: February 13, 2018, 18:20:31 »
This is a song I wrote 6 months ago, it's about someone who's used to bad things happening to him and once something good happens he thinks he is dreaming. I hope you like it!





Lyrics


Your lips touching my skin
It feels like itís almost real
Iíll be dancing all alone in my room
Iíll be counting the stars of my roof

The tips of your fingers are just gold
Who am I stealing this from?
Trying to wake myself but I canít
This is what Iím not used to


You are testing me
You canít be real
Oh kiss me again
And Iíll focus on the taste
Kiss me again for my dreamtest

Floating is not my thing
I canít feel my broken legs
I canít trust this feeling no not at all
Where did my pain go?


You are testing me
You canít be real
Oh kiss me again
And Iíll focus on the taste
Kiss me again for my dreamtest

Kiss me again and Iíll focus on the taste
Kiss me again to see if Iím awake

Offline Leonard Scaper

  • Global Moderator
  • Executive Chef
  • *
  • *
  • Posts: 2230
  • Karma coins: 901
  • Guest Chef
Re: Dreamtest
« Reply #1 on: February 13, 2018, 20:30:30 »
Very cool song and performance @Matu . I love your style.

You put this song together with practically zero rhyming and really pulled it off. I'm impressed.
"The main thing is to have a gutsy approach....but use your head." Julia Child

"Special thanks to Steve Gleason for making me who I am today." Leonard Scaper

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_music.cfm?bandID=540680

Offline Lane

  • Patissier
  • *
  • Posts: 82
  • Karma coins: 35
  • Karma Hunter
Re: Dreamtest
« Reply #2 on: February 13, 2018, 20:53:31 »
nice work @Matu, I urge you to keep at songwriting and singing, I my honest opinion your only going to get better.
again like the work.     Lane

Offline Matu

  • Vegetable Chef
  • *
  • Posts: 31
  • Karma coins: 18
  • 21 year old Singer Songwriter from Argentina
Re: Dreamtest
« Reply #3 on: February 14, 2018, 00:31:35 »
@Leonard Scaper @Lane Thank you very much for your comments!

Offline oorlab

  • Rotisseur
  • *
  • Posts: 472
  • Karma coins: 221
  • savoir vivre
Re: Dreamtest
« Reply #4 on: February 14, 2018, 00:46:08 »
love the fingerpicking & strumming style combination. Sure would be interesting to play this with other musicians in more of a live setting.
Thumbs up for composition and singing the lyrics by heart.
recommending https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/How_Music_Works "How music works", book by David Byrne.

Offline Vince

  • Chef de Partie
  • *
  • Posts: 674
  • Karma coins: 383
Re: Dreamtest
« Reply #5 on: February 14, 2018, 03:52:36 »
@Matu  I like the way your using the low E string as kind of a drone. Kinda takes me back to the old hippie days I think -  could just have been a flash back :) good job.

Vince

 


granny-blade