• Falling Star
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Re: Falling Star
Reply #15 on: December 17, 2019, 16:56:13
Hi @gabrivux  already commented and "hearted" the track on SC . but I'll comment here as well.
Nice work!
Simple and sparse but beautiful in a good way. Very nice lyrics, nice singing, nice performance by all!  :)
Bill
Songwriter, Keyboards, Arranger, Producer & Engineer for November Sound

November Sound is based on the Mother, Father & Son musical trio of Melissa, Bill & Will. I'm the father so anything I post will have my wife singing and/or my son playing percussion.


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Re: Falling Star
Reply #16 on: December 17, 2019, 22:14:40
Thank very much Bill!  :) :) :)
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Re: Falling Star
Reply #17 on: December 17, 2019, 22:21:16
@gabrivux When the song started, I thought I'd fallen into the intro tune for a TV sitcom, something like Cheers. The tune - except possibly for the lyric - would be quite fit for it. Well sung, and well accompanied on the piano. Very well done!
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Re: Falling Star
Reply #18 on: January 06, 2020, 01:27:03
Really nice hook at "fallin' star." The harmonies are awesome.   It sure would be nice if we got to hear them earlier (and more often), but I get it - it's a climax, not really a chorus.  Love your voice and your piano playing.  My only nit.  It seems a bit too slow.  If there was a full orchestra behind you, it would fill in the space and be perfect.  I think your instincts as a songwriter are spot on in that regard; you're creating space for the arrangement. But as a 1+1 (mostly) it could be a bit faster.  Funny how finicky tempo can be.  Often, the very room you play forces a slightly different tempo.

Congrats on a really strong song.



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