• FAR
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FAR
on: October 10, 2020, 14:39:47
« Last Edit: October 16, 2020, 13:46:38 by Mora Amaro La Loba »
Hello everyone, I hope you are well !!
Things have unheard of behaviors and my music too, I think this song proves it, I made it on a backing composed by Marcus, I just had to build the melody on it and ... here it is.

I think the mix is ok and that everything sounds in its place, I hope so.
Take care!!!



Far away,
Far away

Everything seems far away

my breath
my sense of logic

Even my heart
beats away

sometimes
sometimes

and though I live me
I can't reach me
because I'm far
because I'm far

And if I see myself
from the inside,
I do it
from afar, from far
transformed
in perspective

Moving further away
to see
in this amplitude
that being
that does not know
how to be

I call me
I call me
and imagine that I hear me
and that I answer
myself
I am my echo,
echo, echo,

Sometimes
Sometimes
I did not know that to live I had to die so many times
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Re: Sometimes it happens - Nu Music Fusion
Reply #1 on: October 11, 2020, 21:09:48
« Last Edit: October 18, 2020, 09:34:17 by oorlab »
I have been impressed, it has something so special that I still have it in my head, a strange, interesting, very interesting feeling @Mora Amaro La Loba

Those who see and hear it  will feel the same, your voice with that melody  is like a spell
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Re: Sometimes it happens - Nu Music Fusion
Reply #2 on: October 11, 2020, 23:36:58
Exceptional @Mora Amaro La Loba and masterful, and intimidating and inspiring.... so I must get back to work! 😎


Re: Sometimes it happens - Nu Music Fusion
Reply #3 on: October 12, 2020, 21:54:50
Hola @1roomstudio
Muchas gracias, you are very kind. do you think lyrics are ok? No errors in?


Re: Sometimes it happens - Nu Music Fusion
Reply #4 on: October 17, 2020, 21:44:38
Hola @1roomstudio
Muchas gracias, you are very kind. do you think lyrics are ok? No errors in?

The lyrics are great! @Mora Amaro La Loba ... Especially in their sparseness... saying much with few words is high art with storytelling, songwriting, poetry. These lyrics achieve all of that...  ::thumb:: ::thumb:: ::thumb::

No errors... but one word that In this context seems awkward in English... “amplitude.”   It is more of a technical term in physics, or astronomy. When I read the verse I believe you mean “wave” or “vibration” 🤔 possibly “space” or “void” ... are any of these words close to your intent? Or have I strayed ... or simply misunderstood? 🤷‍♂️


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Re: FAR
Reply #5 on: October 18, 2020, 08:12:32
Dear @Mora Amaro La Loba
Your work gets a more and more surreal aura with every post you give us.
I can’t figure out if it’s merely a play, a state of mind or a reaction to the lockdown.
If it’s the latter, I hope the lockdown loves us and won’t leave us for some time to come.

Intriguing piece of work @Mora Amaro La Loba @Marcus Nalgaber !
Kind regards, Gus


Re: Sometimes it happens - Nu Music Fusion
Reply #6 on: October 19, 2020, 13:41:10
Hola @1roomstudio
Muchas gracias, you are very kind. do you think lyrics are ok? No errors in?

The lyrics are great! @Mora Amaro La Loba ... Especially in their sparseness... saying much with few words is high art with storytelling, songwriting, poetry. These lyrics achieve all of that...  ::thumb:: ::thumb:: ::thumb::

No errors... but one word that In this context seems awkward in English... “amplitude.”   It is more of a technical term in physics, or astronomy. When I read the verse I believe you mean “wave” or “vibration” 🤔 possibly “space” or “void” ... are any of these words close to your intent? Or have I strayed ... or simply misunderstood? 🤷‍♂️

Thanks for your comment. I don't know if I'm going to explain myself well but ... I speak of "amplitude" in a sense of "vastness", and as I become perspective I become "measures" and I apply that word to describe a wide interior space in the one where things happen, in this case I portray my interior ... I don't want to talk about emptiness, on the contrary I want to portray it as someone who creates a measurable space would.
What a mess!

Mora


Re: Sometimes it happens - Nu Music Fusion
Reply #7 on: October 20, 2020, 19:54:48
I have been impressed, it has something so special that I still have it in my head, a strange, interesting, very interesting feeling @Mora Amaro La Loba

Those who see and hear it  will feel the same, your voice with that melody  is like a spell

Gracias @Marcus Nalgaber

Yes, I think the song has a very special ambient.  ::heart::


Re: FAR
Reply #8 on: October 22, 2020, 15:49:04
Dear @Mora Amaro La Loba
Your work gets a more and more surreal aura with every post you give us.
I can’t figure out if it’s merely a play, a state of mind or a reaction to the lockdown.
If it’s the latter, I hope the lockdown loves us and won’t leave us for some time to come.

Intriguing piece of work @Mora Amaro La Loba @Marcus Nalgaber !
Kind regards, Gus

@LePlongeur
Surely my mood is affected by the virus, I think the same as everyone else, however I think it is something natural in me hahahaha
Thanks for your visit Gus, I love to see you walking through the songs that we are all putting on the forum.

STAY SAFE!!

Mora


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Re: FAR
Reply #9 on: October 23, 2020, 14:42:00
More what a great example of how far you can get with collaboration  and a mix of  personal styles  you both deserve a big applause for this piece of art::heart:: ::heart:: ::heart::
Congratulations  well done


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Re: FAR
Reply #10 on: October 24, 2020, 17:43:46
I really like this @Mora Amaro La Loba . You have got a unique way of expressing yourself.  :)
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Re: FAR
Reply #11 on: October 24, 2020, 19:14:20
An excellent song and video @Mora Amaro La Loba  - I love the mystery in the lyrics (no need to explain - let us find our own meanings in them) and the stereo effects in the mix are really good.  Enjoyed it!
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Re: FAR
Reply #12 on: October 25, 2020, 14:28:27
More what a great example of how far you can get with collaboration  and a mix of  personal styles  you both deserve a big applause for this piece of art::heart:: ::heart:: ::heart::
Congratulations  well done

@Krysoe
Thank you so much, yes, the guitar of Marcus is so special to my songs!!! Stay safe!!!

Mora


Re: FAR
Reply #13 on: October 25, 2020, 14:29:25
I really like this @Mora Amaro La Loba . You have got a unique way of expressing yourself.  :)

Wiw! @GaryHynes
Nice to meet you and many thanks for your so nice comment.

Mora


Re: FAR
Reply #14 on: October 25, 2020, 14:31:28
An excellent song and video @Mora Amaro La Loba  - I love the mystery in the lyrics (no need to explain - let us find our own meanings in them) and the stereo effects in the mix are really good.  Enjoyed it!

Yes, mystery is a very special color, it gives the necessary freedom to the listener to imagine...

Thank you very much @redmando