• Faux punk song - quarantine
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Faux punk song - quarantine
on: June 14, 2020, 05:44:14
Hope this is fun

Sound: https://soundcloud.com/user-568851570/quarantine/s-NM2kvm8cSur

Words:
used paperbacks to show my class
all stacked
and lined on wooden shelves,
display myself, betray my mental health,
no visitors
so what the hell,
switch t shirts out, light blue for dark,
Wear a pocket tee, like,
look at me,
my reflection like a shadow
in a dark,
dark window

Quarantined in a dream
Since 20 16
The creep of gradual change
New versions of truth
shifting burdens of proof
Everything still looks the fucking same

A parade of cars Waving by front yards
And grandmaís
on the Porch swing
Birthday cake in cyberspace
Happy eighth
I didnít send you anything
The ac is on, the days are long
bright eyes put out a song
Iím in the driveway kicking a soccer ball
I hope youre well and your belt
Still fits
cause mines too small now

Quarantined in the same routine
Since twenty nineteen
I can feel the fucking earth spin - slow
The future through a sunroof
The past in a crooked tooth
Everything is how itís always been


Re: Faux punk song - quarantine
Reply #1 on: June 14, 2020, 13:50:15
Wow! This is fantastic! I LOVE the lo-fi presentation with those overdriven vocals.

Damn, man.......this tune strikes hard and takes absolutely NO prisoners. I love it. These lyrics and SO good but that last verse is gold.
"The main thing is to have a gutsy approach....but use your head." Julia Child

 "In a world of robotic conformity, the only originality left in music is the imperfections" Eric Craptone

"Special thanks to Steve Gleason for making me who I am today." Leonard Scaper

Lenny's Tunes: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_music.cfm?bandID=540680

https://soundcloud.com/vincentgleason


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Re: Faux punk song - quarantine
Reply #2 on: June 14, 2020, 16:01:03
Hi @thewinefestival , yes this is fun!  Sung with passion and attitude, it sounds great to me

strong hints of Oasis in the vocal melody, in my opinion (right @man of simple pleasures  :yes: :yes: :yes:  ?)



great job!  :thumbsup:
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Re: Faux punk song - quarantine
Reply #3 on: June 14, 2020, 16:41:35
Even the running time is exactly OK.
The air full of aerosols, thanks the force of forcefull shouting.
Like it.
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Re: Faux punk song - quarantine
Reply #4 on: June 14, 2020, 18:27:35
@thewinefestival Strong poetic lyric, I like that. The music sounds raw and unpolished, which makes for a nice contract, which is reflective of the times we're in.
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Re: Faux punk song - quarantine
Reply #5 on: June 17, 2020, 14:41:43
thanks for listening, i appreciate it.  It was a bit more cathartic than expected  :)


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Re: Faux punk song - quarantine
Reply #6 on: June 18, 2020, 05:36:34
I like the rawness of the whole presentation.  Has a 90's aroma, but with a very relevant flavor of  today'
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Re: Faux punk song - quarantine
Reply #7 on: October 22, 2020, 14:02:22
indie vibes sounds good man! @thewinefestival
fly away and find my peace of mind...
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