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on: July 20, 2015, 22:18:26
i got to here tonight

not a good mix or arrangment
(on a new Fischerman's song)


but since this is the kitchen, i think i can place it here anyway

to get Gordon Ramsey style, clear comments  ;D ;D ;D ;D
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release that inner Gordon Ramsey in you!!!  :o :o :o :o :o :o :o
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Re: feedback needed
Reply #1 on: July 20, 2015, 22:31:39
Hi DB, I'd love to listen but I think the track is private... Can you paste a link with secret code? MM
I'm proud of this track, check it out! https://soundcloud.com/martimedia/dreams


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Reply #2 on: July 20, 2015, 22:35:57
well, it is bad enough to keep it private, but

i will put it on open link...

so that you can all,  ;D ;D ;D Release that Gordon Ramsey in you

done..i set it on public :-\ :-\ :-\ :-\ :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :P :P :-[ :-[ :-[ :-[


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Re: feedback needed
Reply #3 on: July 20, 2015, 22:46:25
Hey DB, I actually like this one! Well done instumentation and mixing. The Gordon Ramsey in me has 2 suggestions:
-I'd love to hear a better recorded voice, to me it sounds to much like singing through a phonespeaker or something like that, but I know Fisch hates recording ;-)
-To me there were too much lyrics for this style. Maybe only take the best vocal hooks and place only those in the mix?
But of course I really enjoyed the track! Hope you appreciate my suggestions. MM


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Reply #4 on: July 20, 2015, 23:04:14
thanks, but i know this is pretty bad what i did so far
 ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D
so, please feel free to go full out Gordon Ramsey  8) 8) 8) 8)
on this

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Re: feedback needed
Reply #5 on: July 21, 2015, 01:16:46
I really like the feel of this track DB :) :) I like your choice of instrumentation, and I also like it when you cut everything out but the vocals 8) gives it some nice dynamics 8)

I know what MM is saying about the vocals, but I also kind of like the effects in some places. The actual track doesn't come up for me on SC, so I can't tell you

exactly where in the song  ::) ::) I think you're onto something very cool with this one DB :) Karma point coming your way ;D ;D

BTW...Great song from Fisch :) :)


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Reply #6 on: August 01, 2015, 16:19:17
The instrumental track sound very unique and memorable. Could be used as soundtrack in some TV shows. The melody is very repetitive, but in this case it's alright, it falls into memory even though it's not the prettiest of the melodies out there. This definitely has some potential. I like it a lot. :)

PS. I think the mix could be better. The vocals should blend more with the track. I feel they are too separated right now.
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Re: feedback needed
Reply #7 on: August 01, 2015, 20:48:45
Hi DB,

I'm with the others; seems too wordy for the musical backdrop. I find it hard to decide which to listen to - words or music - both are fighting for my attention. Both are fine in their own right, but the music is pulling me towards it and i lose the effect of Fisch's vocal. I'm with Marti - less is more. Use the hooks and create some hypnotic track... or don't ;D

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