fold yourself away

hello

this here is another recent collaboration
with the friend who also worked on a handful of other songs with me.

Feedback,criticism most welcome.

link:

https://soundcloud.com/2rightly/fold-yourself-away

lyrics:

fold yourself away

fold yourself away

start to dig deep
mud up to your elbow
whatwill will people think?
the tuth's hard to swallow
and lies leave you hollow

fold yourself away

is that really you?
standing by the window
reflections of time
your body's in limbo
but there is no sin

fold yourself away

don't stop and fall
don't get into trouble
break through the wall
step out of he rubble
a body double

fold yourself away
fold yourself away   
fold yourself away     
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Rightly / Firecat9

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@rightly I found it disturbing/challenging to listen to, but in a good way, I thank you for that. I like this message, too, if I understand it correctly, I am at least getting my own message from it. Thanks for sharing.

- Gary

@rightly I found it disturbing/challenging to listen to, but in a good way, I thank you for that. I like this message, too, if I understand it correctly, I am at least getting my own message from it. Thanks for sharing.

- Gary

thanks for commenting
yes, I know exactly what this song is about
but I don't want to giveaway those details
I think it's better to let the listener to actively imagine their own meaning
I think the interactive element makes it more entertaining