• Forsaken Love
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Forsaken Love
on: September 17, 2019, 22:34:05
Here's a song about transgression of the heart and family, but with a western setting.
All critiques are welcome........and yes, it needs more verses.
Thanks in advance for listening.


Re: Forsaken Love
Reply #1 on: September 18, 2019, 14:10:36
Here's a song about transgression of the heart and family, but with a western setting.
All critiques are welcome........and yes, it needs more verses.
Thanks in advance for listening.

Hi @Kolohe

Sorry but I do not reach to listen to your track...
I did not know that to live I had to die so many times
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Re: Forsaken Love
Reply #2 on: September 18, 2019, 15:24:24
I did download it, although most folks prefer to listen to a streamed song. Consider a Soundcloud account for more responses.

But I am glad I downloaded. The guitar work is excellent and the vocals are wonderfully emotive.....really the whole song flows beautifully. This is a good listen and a very good song.

I really like the live sound of the room.
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Re: Forsaken Love
Reply #3 on: September 18, 2019, 23:20:32
@Kolohe - wonderful! Sounding perfect in the room mix. Liking the song as a whole, bits of Fleetwood Mac feel. Didn't know one could upload mp3's directly to the forum. After downloading I could listen to it easily with Audacity.
Cheers!
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Re: Forsaken Love
Reply #4 on: September 19, 2019, 04:29:28
@Mora Amaro La Loba  sorry about the problem downloading, I will get a sound cloud account as @Leonard Scaper  suggested.

 Thank you @Leonard Scaper  for the listen and kind words as well.

@oorlab mp3 file is what I had, still trying to figure out my way around here. Thank you for the listen and response also.


Re: Forsaken Love
Reply #5 on: September 20, 2019, 01:32:52
41 second intro?  Maybe 8-10 seconds....

I would prefer a lyric sheet....Harmonies on this would kill.....

The musical part sounds cool, but I think it is way too early in tune for that...

Just random thoughts....You can do more with this I believe....Guitar sounds great...Vocal timbre fits perfectly


Re: Forsaken Love
Reply #6 on: September 20, 2019, 05:15:50
Here's a song about transgression of the heart and family, but with a western setting.
All critiques are welcome........and yes, it needs more verses.
Thanks in advance for listening.
Hey @Kolohe ... where’ve you been hiding that recording?

Nice work! Guitar and voice well balanced and clean mix...

Yeah... needs another verse 😎



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