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Frankestein
on: December 09, 2020, 13:30:29

Hola a todos!!!

In these dates close to Christmas I ask myself many things ... among them I think about what we celebrate, what it represents and everything we do wrong forgetting the essential ... I think we all die and are reborn at certain times of our life and that we rebuild as we can, although there is always something loose around there but ... Still we continue to be.
I hope you like the song, my usual question is regarding the volume of the voice and the bass ...
I wish you all a very Merry Christmas and that you take good care of yourself.

Mora



The night calls me
It's time
to walk again
in my shadows
 
the cold makes me
go fast fast fast
even not knowing
where to arrive
 
and while I walk
I get carried away
by the  rhythm
of emptiness
 
One two one two
my steps
 
that make me find
the hidden mirrors on my way
to pick up
the tinny  pieces
of myself
scattered
there and there
there and there
 
 
Here is a piece of heart
a glance
a laugh
a tear
a whisper
 
How to rebuild a mirage
I am a creature
of Frankenstein
 
 
one two  two two
a little jump
to my childhood
one two two two
 
How to rebuild a mirage
I am a creature
of Fankenstein

I did not know that to live I had to die so many times
https://vimeo.com/onacarom


Re: Frankestein
Reply #1 on: December 09, 2020, 14:19:11
Great song! @Mora Amaro La Loba .... I listened to it last night!

Video - I love the colors!.. and absence of colors ..... just so hypnotic, so awesome!   :thumbsup:
Bill
Songwriter, Keyboards, Arranger, Producer & Engineer for November Sound

November Sound is based on the Mother, Father & Son musical trio of Melissa, Bill & Will. I'm the father so anything I post will have my wife singing and/or my son playing percussion.


Re: Frankestein
Reply #2 on: December 09, 2020, 14:26:50
Definitely a hypnotic journey into your thoughts @Mora Amaro La Loba .

I think the vocal level is good but you might want to consider a bit of de-essing. Listen to the ssss's in this verse, for instance:

Here is a piece of heart
a glance
a laugh
a tear
a whisper


Still we continue to be.

Yes we do, Mora.  :)
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Re: Frankestein
Reply #3 on: December 09, 2020, 14:53:01
I would agree with the de-easing suggestion. But with your voice’s timbre that may proof to be a technical solution that does more than you bargained for.
My half way or in between solution would be an experiment.

Go through Marcus’ drawer of socks, select a cotton sock for the summer and carefully pull that over the microphone. Maybe it were for the best if M holds the mic and you gently pulls it over it.

It may filter the sharp edges off. Without affecting your voice too much.
Having said that, of course I enjoyed your intriguing song.

What’s more. I’m going to give it another spin.
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Re: Frankestein
Reply #4 on: December 10, 2020, 08:16:13
Clever lyric................I like this, M.
Good video, as well....................interesting stuff!

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Re: Frankestein
Reply #5 on: December 11, 2020, 18:37:04
Great song! @Mora Amaro La Loba .... I listened to it last night!

Video - I love the colors!.. and absence of colors ..... just so hypnotic, so awesome!   :thumbsup:

Thank you Bill, It cost me a lot of work but I got a coloring that goes very well with the story. I am limited by my means and my bad eyesight but when I see my work it is as if I did miracles for myself.
Happy holidays and thank you for your visit and for your comment.

Stay well

Mora


Re: Frankestein
Reply #6 on: December 12, 2020, 02:31:01
"and while I walk
I get carried away
by the  rhythm
of emptiness"  :thumbsup: Wonderful lyrics!  Great music video.
Create!


Re: Frankestein
Reply #7 on: December 12, 2020, 15:17:29
Definitely a hypnotic journey into your thoughts @Mora Amaro La Loba .

I think the vocal level is good but you might want to consider a bit of de-essing. Listen to the ssss's in this verse, for instance:

Here is a piece of heart
a glance
a laugh
a tear
a whisper


Still we continue to be.

Yes we do, Mora.  :)

Hola @Leonard Scaper
Nice to see you commenting on my song! Thank you!!! Yes, I know, I have to find how to do to de-essing my voice...Marcus has put a sponge cover on my microphone, I think it will sound better that way.

Merry Christmas, Feliz Navidad

Mora


Re: Frankestein
Reply #8 on: December 13, 2020, 13:36:35
I would agree with the de-easing suggestion. But with your voice’s timbre that may proof to be a technical solution that does more than you bargained for.
My half way or in between solution would be an experiment.

Go through Marcus’ drawer of socks, select a cotton sock for the summer and carefully pull that over the microphone. Maybe it were for the best if M holds the mic and you gently pulls it over it.

It may filter the sharp edges off. Without affecting your voice too much.
Having said that, of course I enjoyed your intriguing song.

What’s more. I’m going to give it another spin.
Kind regards, Gus

Thanks Gus, it is a good idea although I have laughed a lot when reading your suggestion !!
So far Marcus has put a sponge cover on my microphone, let's see how it goes.
I have a problem with my voice, it is a voice with a lot of low sound, I smoke, and now more, and when I turn up the volume my treble goes off ... Difficult to counteract each other ... I also have a vice, I love to lengthen the "s" from the end of the words, I don't know why I do it ...
Merry Christmas @LePlongeur

Mora


Re: Frankestein
Reply #9 on: December 13, 2020, 21:57:07
Great song! Amazing lyrics and video! :-)
Gabri Vux


Re: Frankestein
Reply #10 on: December 14, 2020, 13:32:06
Clever lyric................I like this, M.
Good video, as well....................interesting stuff!

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Hola @IronKnee
Thank you very much!!! Have nice Holidays!!!

Mora


Re: Frankestein
Reply #11 on: December 15, 2020, 00:15:55
Sort of unrelated @Mora Amaro La Loba   .....sorry ......  ::)  ....  but I remember some kind of a video where you were Santa.

Do you still have that up somewhere?

I want to put it up in the Christmas section of the cafe.


Re: Frankestein
Reply #12 on: December 15, 2020, 12:50:58
Great song! Amazing lyrics and video! :-)

hola @gabrivux
thank you very much, stay well and Merry Christmas!


Re: Frankestein
Reply #13 on: December 15, 2020, 12:55:25
Sort of unrelated @Mora Amaro La Loba   .....sorry ......  ::)  ....  but I remember some kind of a video where you were Santa.

Do you still have that up somewhere?

I want to put it up in the Christmas section of the cafe.

hola Bill, Santa is on the Other Arts section untitled as "Santa in a hurry", tell me what I have to do... You can re-place it on the Christmas section or I re-up it? @Bill from November Sound

Felicidades, stay well you and your beloved ones!!

Mora


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Re: Frankestein
Reply #14 on: December 16, 2020, 16:38:28
Ha @Mora Amaro La Loba , i think this is a great track, i love the sounds....and the very reggae-ish groove is awesome

a treat to listen to it  :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: @Goatrelated , check this out!

i like this, only thing that i could pick on is that i would like the track to build and become bigger towards the end, i think it should perhaps climax more towards the end, but i love this sound and the attitude and atmosphere from the video  :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:
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