• Ghost Challenge - The Picture of my Dad
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Re: Ghost Challenge - The Picture of my Dad
Reply #15 on: October 08, 2019, 18:25:09
@Pleudoniem

Thanks for sharing with us your captured thoughts....

…Such highly moving words in your opening post and within the verses. I get what you say ‘lyrics almost started writing itself’ – it does feel that way too on listening... it flows on, bearing the weight of heavy emotion in the sound of the music. Such a strong atmosphere is imparted by the instrumental knit together by the well-put lyrics... A very powerful song...
Rachel  ::Rachel::
https://.com/rachel_debattista


Re: Ghost Challenge - The Picture of my Dad
Reply #16 on: October 12, 2019, 15:23:20
Excellent @Pleudoniem  , really excellent! After reading your intro I was completely hooked .... the song itself held my attention but caused my mind to wander as well .... if that makes sense. The message is powerful and relatable.

The line:

Sipping from her tea
I am sure she understands
Why I keep the table bare
And won’t display it there

It just plays out in black and white images in my mind.
Musically I enjoy the percussive elements and all the melodic details occurring throughout the song.
Good show!
-11 ::Note::

 
Bill
Songwriter, Keyboards, Arranger, Producer & Engineer for November Sound

November Sound is based on the Mother, Father & Son musical trio of Melissa, Bill & Will. I'm the father so anything I post will have my wife singing and/or my son playing percussion.



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