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Ghost of Judy
on: September 07, 2019, 12:53:40
https://soundcloud.com/oorlab/ghost-of-judy

Last week I upgraded from Windows 7 to 10, and am still in compatability hell, with many weird ghostly behaviour of the machine. May be I share some details later - but for now, I thank the muses for guiding me through the maze to get the track up.
As usual I warmly welcome comments and ideas for new versions. Happy to share credits too.

Have you seen the ghost of Judy,
Roaming in the park?
She learned her lines, did her duty
but somehow lost her spark.

Haunted by fame and stardom,
 - that cruel machine -
Left her out, in the cold
and treated her so mean.

Can you spare a thought for Judy?
She still needs to be loved.
Will she rise and find some freedom
in heavens up above?

Eternal curse
that pulled her under,
no-one could escape
the fog that hangs
over this land,
paints a dreadful shape.

Don't you gaze
into those eyes
that follow you through the street:
the wanting, yearning,
most brokenhearted
girl you could ever meet.

Say a prayer
for the ghost of Judy
She might be redeemed

And in her next
incarnation
She may start out clean.
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Re: Ghost of Judy
Reply #1 on: September 07, 2019, 14:20:17
@oorlab I just met Judy, she was so beautiful and and so charming, but there was fear in her eyes, stuck as if she was hoping to remember a smile but was unable to. I recognised her immediately, but I'm not sure if she could hear what I said to her. It may sound peculiar, but in her case, I believe in ghosts.
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Re: Ghost of Judy
Reply #2 on: September 07, 2019, 19:01:27
Strong images in the opening verse @oorlab and I like the way you make to message more universal in the last verse.
There`s a nice dynamic when the fiddle breaks come in - I hope you keep those if you make this more "modern"
I wish I knew more about the music of Judy`s time-maybe there would be some way to hint at that in another arrangement, though I enjoy the simple folk sound here.
Is this your Ghostly Challenge entry?

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Re: Ghost of Judy
Reply #3 on: September 07, 2019, 19:47:31
 :ok: :ok: :ok: :ok: what a strong song @oorlab  :yes: :yes: :yes:  i love it

what a great entry for the ......Ghost-in-the-Kitchen - Songwriting challenge
the violin is fantastic  ::headphone:: ::headphone:: ::headphone::...btw way do you also do these pizzicatos on your violin?

nice musical arrangment!!!!!
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Re: Ghost of Judy
Reply #4 on: September 07, 2019, 20:43:23
@oorlab

I agree, the violin is a great addition in this , good music and I really like that ending to the song.


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Re: Ghost of Judy
Reply #5 on: September 07, 2019, 22:45:52
« Last Edit: September 08, 2019, 20:17:06 by oorlab »
Cheers @Pleudoniem -  next time you see Judy say hello. Her story is tragic - a victim of fame & film industry pressure.
@Dutchbeat  - indeed the pizzicatos and bowed parts are all played in the same track and mic position. I did some post editing to level the levels.
@robertkc - thanks for the feedback. The first verse presented itself when I read somewhere about a new film with Renée Zellweger playing Garland. Also one ingredient of inspiration is the old "Have you seen the ghost of Tom" - which is a small nursery rhyming song the choir I sing in uses as a warm up canon.



Re: Ghost of Judy
Reply #6 on: September 09, 2019, 12:56:57
This song was born to enter the challenge @oorlab   !!!! When celebrities die engulfed by their shadow ... Beautiful lyrics and beautiful poetic way to soften oblivion.

Forgive me for telling you this but right at the beginning of the song I noticed something strange, as if there was a clash of sounds or time ...
I did not know that to live I had to die so many times
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Re: Ghost of Judy
Reply #7 on: September 09, 2019, 14:36:30
I really like the character of this track....that violin is perfect played both ways.

Good writing here both musically and lyrically and as @Lane mentioned, the ending really works dynamically in the way it builds.
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Re: Ghost of Judy
Reply #8 on: September 09, 2019, 21:03:07
Cheers @Leonard Scaper ;
Pas du tout @Mora Amaro La Loba  - these comments about possible strange things in the recording, mix etc. is most helpful. You mean possibly the dissonant piano in the intro? That was sort of coincidental but I left it in to heigthen the spooky atmosphere. Or was there something in the rhythm?


Re: Ghost of Judy
Reply #9 on: September 12, 2019, 11:50:25
Awesome man! love the instrumental breaks, very cool!


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Re: Ghost of Judy
Reply #10 on: September 13, 2019, 05:34:52
Hi @oorlab

Very Steely Dan to a lot of this but the violin gives it a unique sound.

I like your vocals - almost story telling but still melodic.

The ending is wonderful.

cheers


Re: Ghost of Judy
Reply #11 on: October 01, 2019, 03:36:20
WOW man.....BEAUTIFUL
and what a good story, I'll think off all the Judy's out there.
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Re: Ghost of Judy
Reply #12 on: October 05, 2019, 10:00:56
I enjoyed this lot. The strings sound real, clever vocal melody, earthy instrumentation. Great job!


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Re: Ghost of Judy
Reply #13 on: October 08, 2019, 18:32:44
@oorlab ,

Strong story telling nicely complimented by the instrumental, fitting perfectly with the theme of the challenge. I really like the choice of instruments, very interesting mix of sounds. I particularly like the strings section – it is sounding amazing! :)

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Re: Ghost of Judy
Reply #14 on: October 12, 2019, 02:23:04
Love this. Fiddle amazing. Great lyrics. To me this could have been a song in the film The Wckerman.



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