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Ghosts of my Past -Original-
on: July 11, 2016, 09:39:42

I often lie awake in bed ya see
Thinking of lost friends and company
How we grow together or how we grow apart
The difference is where we start.

As I fall into a wonderland my dreams bring you back to me

I often lie awake and bed ya see
Thinking of my wrong and good past deeds
What I am, Who I was, and What I thought id be
The truth has really set me free

As I fall into a wonderland my dreams bring you back to me My dreams bring you back to me

And as the world drifts away I dream of the lights and the city stage
All my friends have come to play and sing dance in their little ways

I know this dream illusion won't come to an end till the morning light
So let's spend this time together remembering our lights in each others lives.

How we loved and how we waited all those precious days away
How we wasted all that time to find that love had left away
And all the years between then and now id give back to time to tell you what was true, My love inside and all I thought of you.

And I know my dreams wont show my love to you even though it's true
But i'd give every night and day from tomorrow til the end of my dying day
To spend the night with you
To spend my life with you

Dawn cuts the night
Ghost of my past in flight
You're still with me when i open my eyes from sleep

I know(x3)... That dreams bring hope

And then you fade unto the black
The dreams they end my life comes back
Still I hope and still I pray

Dreams will bring you back to me
Dreams will really set me free.

This is my one true love.  Dealing with emotional garbage.  Who isn't, but the one thing that brings me comfort is playing and writing.  any feedback is appreciated.  No that you are not alone in quiet desperation.
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Re: Ghosts of my Past -Original-
Reply #1 on: July 11, 2016, 12:05:43
Hi Day2, what a fantastic performance!!!!! Great keys and super voice  ::thumb:: ::thumb:: ::thumb:: ::thumb::

Welcome to this forum, grab a kitchen chair and make yourself at home. I hope you will like it here.

perhaps you can tell a bit about yourself in the me-section? Where are you from?

Anyway, a great song and performance in your you tube film!!!!!! ::thumb::
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Re: Ghosts of my Past -Original-
Reply #2 on: July 11, 2016, 21:53:28
Wow....this is complex but really great.

Great Piano play. I think I like you voice very much because everything flows naturally.


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Re: Ghosts of my Past -Original-
Reply #3 on: July 14, 2016, 00:57:38
Hey @Day2Take1

What a wonderful song! So sad, so authentic, so beautiful. It's complex indeed (like @Siobhan Dakay said), almost like a classical piece, but at the same time it's very approachable and just a pleasure to listen to. Both your playing and singing are very good and you look like it's just a piece of cake for you to perform it. Respect!
Looking forward to listen to more of these... ::headphone::


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