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Golem - FAWM
on: February 19, 2021, 13:07:29
« Last Edit: February 19, 2021, 22:37:30 by oorlab »
Hello, i just finished this for @LePlongeur's  FAWM - Project.
The premise here for me was to create a link to the first constribution.
And in such a way this is practically the opposite in terms of content. In the first contribution it was about something comes to an end, even dies and here it is about when something is brought into a being. The first post was very long and this one is very short.
In addition, I wanted to meet the suggestion of @Vince and @oorlab and did it, at least partially, in german.

Of course you can't expect perfection in any aspectI, just played around as usual.


https://soundcloud.com/user-65096772/golem



GOLEM

Stehe! stehe!
denn wir haben
deiner Gaben
vollgemessen! –
Ach, ich merk es! Wehe! wehe!
Hat ich nicht die Macht besessen?
Doch es gibt kein Wort, worauf am Ende
du das wird, was du gewesen.
Ach, du läufst und machst behende!
Wärst du doch nicht dieses Wesen!!

I understand the situation
You had fun with procreation
Gave in to the wow sensation
what had triggered transformation

As a godlike bisquit baker
kneaded dough and you create her
don't want her a mischief maker?
then please care about'n take her

Look, for ever it's  your golem
Love your golem? Feed your golem!
Hate your golem? Kill your golem!
Oh for ever it's  your golem

Of shape less mass to immense size
grew huge but stupid and not wise
While day by day more strength she rise
she never laugh she never cries

Look, for ever it's  your golem
Love your golem? Feed your golem!
Hate your golem? Kill your golem!
Oh for ever it's  your golem
Und es gibt kein Wort, worauf am Ende
du das wird, was du gewesen.
Ach, du läufst und machst behende!
Wärst du doch nicht dieses Wesen!!



German Part Translated with www.DeepL.com/Translator (free version):

Stand! Stand!
for we have
of your gifts
measured to the full! - –
Oh, I realize it! Woe! woe!
Have I not possessed the power?
But there is no word, whereupon in the end
you become what you were.
Oh, you run and make nimble!
If only you were not this creature!


Re: Golem - FAWM
Reply #1 on: February 19, 2021, 16:05:39
@Mo - this is really great - great soundscape


Re: Golem - FAWM
Reply #2 on: February 19, 2021, 16:35:57
@Mo   I use google translate myself mostly. By the time I listened to your song it had 42 hearts ,  12 reposts  and 661 listens. In my world that would make it a chart topping hit.

It's nice that there is going to be some diversity on this record, some Dutch songs, a German song, maybe some other songs in different languages would be nice.
Vince


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Re: Golem - FAWM
Reply #3 on: February 19, 2021, 16:51:41
Wow, I really. like your fast response! :D

Thank you very much for commenting here and at soundcloud @revival-choir! It was really nice!

@Vince,  these numbers are more results of free promoting what is pretty often around at soundcloud. It means rather nothing than just looks nice, maybe.   To me just real comments and plays like yours are important  :)


Re: Golem - FAWM
Reply #4 on: February 19, 2021, 18:00:27
@Mo plays or no plays, it is a pleasure to listen to.


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Re: Golem - FAWM
Reply #5 on: February 19, 2021, 19:40:05
« Last Edit: February 19, 2021, 19:42:03 by Dutchbeat »
 :o :o :o wow, this is good @Mo , different for sure

awesome!!!!  :o :o :o :o :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

it is like Falco, but even more intense

very good  ::thumb::
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Re: Golem - FAWM
Reply #6 on: February 19, 2021, 19:51:59
:o :o :o wow, this is good @Mo , different for sure

awesome!!!!  :o :o :o :o :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

it is like Falco, but even more intense

very good  ::thumb::

Thank you @Dutchbeat!! I really was curious how you would like it!

And in case you comment on this song, I wanted to tell you that this song, among others, is also dedicated specifically to you as the creator of a real golem.

Yes... and Falco .... what I guess we undeniably have in common is bad English pronunciation!!! LOL


 


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Re: Golem - FAWM
Reply #7 on: February 19, 2021, 21:54:28
Impressive strong song, very much digging the groove and combination of german & english. I hear a Einsturzende Neubauten vibe here and there.


Re: Golem - FAWM
Reply #8 on: February 20, 2021, 13:03:19
Hola @Mo
I did not know what I was going to hear although the title already announced something special ... And it has been. Character, energy, strength, determination, something unstoppable, that is the feeling that you have transmitted to me.  ::heart:: ::heart:: ::heart::

Mora
I did not know that to live I had to die so many times
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Re: Golem - FAWM
Reply #9 on: February 21, 2021, 19:14:59
Aw, I'm always so happy you are around here and about your comments @Mora Amaro La Loba  ::heart::

Always you show me another perspective and i appreciate your feedback very much coz  it helps me to make me more aware of some aspects that I might try to adjust and consider the next time I record a song. All in all, I sometimes feel a bit ashamed afterwards, when there are a few days in between, because I just blew something out without having had a concretely thought-out 'concept'.
( Please stay)
::heart:: ::heart:: ::heart::


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Re: Golem - FAWM
Reply #10 on: February 22, 2021, 07:03:54
Can’t believe that this gem escaped my attention.
What a beauty for the FAWM album!
So very very well done @Mo !!!
Kind regards, Gus



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