Halloween song, any suggestions?

Hey Kitchenites,

I've recorded my Halloween song, as yet without any proper instrumentation, and I have made a first edit of a video, which is hopefully a bit scary  . The video follows the story of the song and must be watched to the end 

If anyone has any ideas to make it better, or wants to help with adding instrumentation, let me know.

Cheers

Hi Habitat,

This is looking/sounding great. Love the colours/effects in the vid. The music has a slightly menacing feel, even though it isn't deliberately spooky sounding. I'm thinking Wicker Man (the original version) sense of horror.

Now, the Lorelei bit. Please forgive me, but it instantly made me think of this;



Good stuff.

Digger

Haha, oh dear 

Haha, cheers, I think 

Ha Habi, man that is good!!!!


i think it is excellent, the vocal harmonies and singmelody are great

you are a topsongwriter!!!!!!!

i like the video too, very fitting atmosphere, scary ending was not needing IMO

but i enjoyed this completely

i can add some things, and would like to but i realise this does not ask for much, and certainly not Db going overboard on the beat 

but i can hear some keys just doubling the lalala lorelei

and a supporting bass (fretless bass sound on the keys??)

but it doesn't need it at all

ACE!!!!!!!!! and karma awarded in a dose to match that 

Thanks DB, I'll send some tracks over when I get some time, it was recorded to a click as well, so it shouldn't be too tricky