• (Have You Seen) My Little Girl
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(Have You Seen) My Little Girl
on: January 09, 2020, 23:20:38
Hello to all in the kitchen,
I've finished my new thing, some kind of pop-folk melody and I would like to read your opinion.
https://soundcloud.com/martin_horky/have-you-seen-my-little-girl
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Re: (Have You Seen) My Little Girl
Reply #1 on: January 10, 2020, 13:29:14
Sounds good @dr_Shad . I have to say though that the cadence changes are a little confusing throughout. I could never quite get into a groove.
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Re: (Have You Seen) My Little Girl
Reply #2 on: January 14, 2020, 21:40:11
Thank you, @Leonard Scaper , for your review. The rhythm is changing from 4/4 in prelude to 3/4 in verse, then 4/4 in interlude and back to 3/4. I'm the child of 70's prog rock, you know (King Crimson, Jethro Tull etc.)  ;) It should have sounded somewhat weird. Nothing like nowadays easy-listening pop shit...  ;D


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Re: (Have You Seen) My Little Girl
Reply #3 on: January 14, 2020, 21:56:53
It should have sounded somewhat weird. Nothing like nowadays easy-listening pop shit...  ;D

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