• Hello Black Crow
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Hello Black Crow
on: January 30, 2020, 12:25:15
Here's something I put together this morning. It's about overbearing male figures that use their position of authority to control you. A situation that made me very angry recently was the inspiration. Given the time I put it together in, I realise there are elements that require work. But I'm open to critical feedback nonetheless. Ultimately I want to get better at doing things on the fly.

Well I hope you enjoy the theatre

https://soundcloud.com/montycashmusic/hello-black-crow-original-song

Lyrics:
Hello Black Crow
Sing your sad song
Weave your trembling banshee cry

I have reason
I'm entitled
You will listen to my rifle

Tit and tat
Fears and plats
I am in Control here

Reason waning
Earth forbading
Who here, has a mouth they own?

Who here, has a mouth they own?
Who here, has a mouth they own?

Life is simple
Little crinkle
Do as you are told
Sir

Don't ignore me
Nor speak back!
My word here is final!

Motion sickness
What is real?
Principles forsake me!

Gaslight alley
Darkness
Lost
Now I must survey the cost

Who here, has a mouth they own?
Who here, has a mouth they own?
Who here, has a mouth they own?
Who here, has a mouth they own?
Find updates on my travels and music on http://steemit.com/@montycashmusic


Re: Hello Black Crow
Reply #1 on: January 30, 2020, 16:54:46
Hola @Monty Cash Music

I like the title of your song, it is already a story ...
And the way you sing the lyrics translates the image of a  tale, most people associate the image of the black crow with something dangerous, perverse.
I have been very entertained.

I like a lot "Who here, has a mouth they own?"

Mora
I did not know that to live I had to die so many times
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Re: Hello Black Crow
Reply #2 on: January 30, 2020, 17:39:44
@Mora Amaro La Loba

Thanks for coming and checking out the song.

I like this line you mention a lot as well. To me I am saying, who, with all their ideals and principles; beliefs and rights and righteousness; actually has the capacity to speak these things in the heat of the moment. Who owns their mouth that they can actually speak what their calm mind thinks when conflict forces them into an adrenaline limited state of consciousness.

It's a direct attribution to what happens when manipulative people put pressure on you, and present a situation in a certain way, knowing that they have shut down your deep thinking ability with this 'heat of the moment' pressure. Then use this situation to get you to agree to things that you wouldn't normally have agreed to if you were in a calm or self-reflective state.

Strong personalities in this world are my greatest nemesis and yet I have also been this nemesis sometimes. Self-awareness with patient respect of each individual perspective is true communication.


Re: Hello Black Crow
Reply #3 on: January 30, 2020, 21:06:09
yeah man pretty mega! psychedelic madness, love it!! @Monty Cash Music
fly away and find my peace of mind...
http://soundcloud.com/man-of-simple-pleasures



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