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hijack the kingdom (rough demo)
on: August 02, 2014, 12:43:18
hey there!

ok... not been on here for a while but gonna start and get involved again but just thought i'l post this, not really posted much song stuff anyhow on here but a rough demo i'm gonna work on!

any ideas would help.... the last bit is'nt done so need to work on that


its called hijack the kingdom




there's a dragon in my fever
he's kicking up a calm
before he's feeding the storm

theres an eagle within the empire
who's gonna grab you and
stare at you and stoke up the fire

cause its high time you
stuck up a fight for love
and its a high crime to
give up the fight on love...

theres a prophet to be spoke of
so lets hijack the kingdom
and see what is written?

cause its high time you
stuck up a fight for love
and its a high crime to
give up the fight on love..
fly away and find my peace of mind...
http://soundcloud.com/man-of-simple-pleasures


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Re: hijack the kingdom (rough demo)
Reply #1 on: August 02, 2014, 12:52:10
Hi MOSP,

Starts with a nice groove. I'd maybe extend it a little, bring in some other lines, drums or whatever before the vocal kicks in. I was thinking Sympathy For The Devil sort of thing - that gradual build.
Nice guitar line - just needs a little tightening. Lyrics are good.
Lots of potential.

Digger


Re: hijack the kingdom (rough demo)
Reply #2 on: August 02, 2014, 13:10:05
nice one mate!

see what your saying, sympathy for the devil is a mega tune, would love to get it a bit like that groove, just need to spend time time in all things production to build things up with additional things, if i can work out where to start haha instead of just bashing things out on the acoustic.. am getting into the drums tho on me ipad for me smile with the devil song haha which i hope to get up for a listen soon!

cheers digger!


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Re: hijack the kingdom (rough demo)
Reply #3 on: August 02, 2014, 13:13:32
nice tune, catchy

certainly worthwhile to add some extra's and make it big  ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D
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Re: hijack the kingdom (rough demo)
Reply #4 on: August 02, 2014, 14:18:18
Hi  MOSP
                  Nice rough demo.  I agree it has a nice melody & can be finished to sound  great!.  I like the acoustic  guitar chords  & might prefare a little less reverb on the vocals. yes  pursue this further &  by  adding some backbone rhythm & bass guitar  It would be   sweet!     

                                                    Nice lyrics    too!                            Stylus  :)                 


Re: hijack the kingdom (rough demo)
Reply #5 on: August 03, 2014, 00:23:53
Nice demo MoSP :) I like the melody and the lyrics are intriguing  :  it's got some real potential, so let's to make it into a big production  8) 8)


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Re: hijack the kingdom (rough demo)
Reply #6 on: August 03, 2014, 01:47:24
Unique Man thats what i like about you, no more said Man   8)


Re: hijack the kingdom (rough demo)
Reply #7 on: August 04, 2014, 20:06:48
cheers buds for listening and commenting!

production skills aint me forte but trying to produce sumit decent is the aim haha!




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