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Hurry up (it's your day)
on: November 27, 2018, 19:42:55
Hi Mates,

I wrote and made a new song this week: Hurry up (it's your day)
It's a DEMO at the moment, but i'm curious about your opinion.

https://soundcloud.com/jellody/hurry-up-its-your-day-demo

Thank you so much!! :)



Re: Hurry up (it's your day)
Reply #1 on: November 27, 2018, 22:18:27
Hi @Jellody  - sounding fresh and cheerful. Nice synthpop. Only advice I can give is may be mix the reverb of the vocal a bit to make the lyrics more hearable.
Very catchy chorus.
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Re: Hurry up (it's your day)
Reply #2 on: November 27, 2018, 22:42:11
Definitely a catchy little tune.....nice to hear an upbeat and uplifting production like this.

I do agree with @oorlab about the reverb levels on the vocals, though. Sounds as if you have some good lyrics going.........let them speak out and be heard, right?

I'm assuming you're using the autotune as an effect. Don't hide your vocals behind that stuff, man......there is character in your voice. Work with it. The vocal is important in a song like this.

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Re: Hurry up (it's your day)
Reply #3 on: November 27, 2018, 23:19:05
Hey @Jellody - lovely little tune you've got going here.. I tend to agree with the guys about the vocal effect.. try to back off it a little (easy for us to say I know :)!) Look forward to hearing more of this!


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Re: Hurry up (it's your day)
Reply #4 on: November 28, 2018, 08:33:28
Hi guys,

Thanks for the feedback, I agree with the voice! It's a demo, I will upgrade the voice and do less reverb.

Thanks! :)


Re: Hurry up (it's your day)
Reply #5 on: November 28, 2018, 11:11:49
Quality tune, I love it. The atmosphere you've created is great. Looking forward to hearing how this song develops :)


Re: Hurry up (it's your day)
Reply #6 on: November 28, 2018, 13:32:16
Beautiful voice, beautiful melody, love this song  ::thumb::
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Re: Hurry up (it's your day)
Reply #7 on: November 28, 2018, 20:05:16
that sounds good  ::thumb:: ::thumb:: ::thumb:: @Jellody   ::headphone:: ::headphone:: ::headphone:: ::headphone::

ah...very, very nice   ::headphone:: ::headphone::
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Re: Hurry up (it's your day)
Reply #8 on: November 29, 2018, 12:23:57
Does it have lyrics? If so can post them?


Re: Hurry up (it's your day)
Reply #9 on: November 30, 2018, 00:25:47
Nice song. I enjoyed the hypnotic melody, the understated drums and the subtle synths. No idea what the lyrics meant but that's no big deal!.


Re: Hurry up (it's your day)
Reply #10 on: November 30, 2018, 05:18:49
" You're waiting 'til next Saturday night but I'm waiting until the end of time." 
It's like the Restaurant at the End of the Universe or something ...lyrics that make you think.....  Those are some cool lyrics @Jellody    :D

Nice hypnotic, modern pop, trance-like, happy-go-lucky sonority. I like your sound. 
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November Sound is based on the Mother, Father & Son musical trio of Melissa, Bill & Will. I'm the father so anything I post will have my wife singing and/or my son playing percussion.



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