• I am puzzled, puzzled, puzzled
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I am puzzled, puzzled, puzzled
on: March 07, 2022, 19:11:01
I made this song a few months ago and as a result of what is happening now I added an initial paragraph trying to portray the contradictions of life since in the video I appear cooking a chicken while my dove watches what I do from the top of my hat, both, chicken and dove, are birds... one I eat and the other I save and take care of. Life things.
I hope the video serves to explain how I feel about what is happening.
The only doubt I have is with the title, I don't know whether to call it I am puzzled, puzzled, puzzled or as space expands... What do you think?
Thanks for commenting to whoever comments. Take care of yourselves, life is a cat, it doesn't know that playing can kill us.

Stay well

Mora



I am puzzled puzzled puzzled
cooking a tender chicken
with my dove on my hat
in my so white kitchen
while the news talk about the war
as if it were
a football match

I am puzzled puzzled puzzled
I understand everything
 from so much understanding
my mind and my heart clash
despite knowing
that nothing
will avoid the inevitable

I am one of those who think
that if everything exists
everything must happen

I am puzzled puzzled puzzled

as space expands
looking for its meaning x2


I am puzzled puzzled puzzled
everything goes further
taking me behind
like a shadow
searching the foot
that ties her to existence
in tisgame that has no sense

the bad and the good
are swimming
between my blood
and my thoughts
while all fhe formulas happen
here and there and eveywhere


as space expands
looking for its meaning

I did not know that to live I had to die so many times
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Re: I am puzzled, puzzled, puzzled
Reply #1 on: March 09, 2022, 10:17:39
The video is great!  Lots going on musically and interesting lyrics.  Its is interesting and rarely consistent where we humans draw the line.  I prefer 'space expands' as a title.  Purely from a marketing point of view, I think that would be a track I might check out over 'I am puzzled, puzzled, puzzled' if going on title alone.  Both work of course:)


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Re: I am puzzled, puzzled, puzzled
Reply #2 on: March 09, 2022, 14:10:03
This is just fantastic, Mora! You have reached a high water mark in both your messaging and your production.

I agree with @DavidHutton about the title choice.
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Re: I am puzzled, puzzled, puzzled
Reply #3 on: March 10, 2022, 19:14:14
The video is great!  Lots going on musically and interesting lyrics.  Its is interesting and rarely consistent where we humans draw the line.  I prefer 'space expands' as a title.  Purely from a marketing point of view, I think that would be a track I might check out over 'I am puzzled, puzzled, puzzled' if going on title alone.  Both work of course:)

Hola @DavidHutton

Yes, I agree with you, the ideal would be As space expands but at a marketing level or to attract more attention it would be I am puzzled puzzled puzzled..
Thank you very much for your kind comment.

Mora


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Re: I am puzzled, puzzled, puzzled
Reply #4 on: March 12, 2022, 13:32:22
Aww, a new origin Mora  Amora La Loba!!!  :loveit:

The vid is awesome and you look so amazing, like a trrue world star!! ;) :ok:

I would call this track 'The dove and the chicken' @Mora Amaro La Loba

Stay save and healthy, best wishes to Marcus, too!


Re: I am puzzled, puzzled, puzzled
Reply #5 on: March 13, 2022, 11:49:52
This is just fantastic, Mora! You have reached a high water mark in both your messaging and your production.

I agree with @DavidHutton about the title choice.

Hola @Leonard Scaper

Glad you liked it. Yes, I think the title must be this one. Thank you so much for your nice comment.
Stay well

Mora


Re: I am puzzled, puzzled, puzzled
Reply #6 on: March 14, 2022, 21:49:24
Aww, a new origin Mora  Amora La Loba!!!  :loveit:

The vid is awesome and you look so amazing, like a trrue world star!! ;) :ok:

I would call this track 'The dove and the chicken' @Mora Amaro La Loba

Stay save and healthy, best wishes to Marcus, too!

Hola @Mo
It has been a fantastic time making the son and the vid!!! Thank you very much for your so nice comment. The reality is that I am, well, we are really puzzled puzzled puzzled watching what is happening, evil is happy, he has a lot of accomplices.
I hope you are well, sure our are ok!!

Mig kiss.
Mora ::heart:: ::heart:: ::heart::


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Re: I am puzzled, puzzled, puzzled
Reply #7 on: March 16, 2022, 16:09:43
nice groove
I like the synths too
fabulous sounds from the guitar

I think a lot of people would be envious of your video making skills

a really nice listen Mora. x


Re: I am puzzled, puzzled, puzzled
Reply #8 on: March 16, 2022, 21:12:31
nice groove
I like the synths too
fabulous sounds from the guitar

I think a lot of people would be envious of your video making skills

a really nice listen Mora. x

Hola @rightly

The truth is that this song was a lot of work to make, it was the pigeon who helped me start it.
I was thinking about what came before, the chicken or the egg" and I thought about the dove, me, the kitchen and that's how it all started.
As you may have seen, the dove is the guest artist, she is a new pet that came to our house in an accidental and predestined way, so here she is, forming part of my universe.
I hope you're well.

Muchas gracias!!!

Mora