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I released my first single
on: February 11, 2019, 23:49:22
Hi guys,

A few years ago I was active on this site, tho Iím the kind of person who reads but doesnít really comment because English isnít my native language so Iím always scared of making mistakes. Anyway, this forum motivated to me to write more songs and I happened to release the first one! I recorded everything myself and only got a little of help with the art cover and mixing/mastering. Since I put a lot of effort into it, Iíd really appreciate it if youíd listen to it. The song is called ĎWhite Wallsí and my new artist new is Left Lynx. Here is a link to spotify: https://open.spotify.com/album/3vGFkm9GqDJcQ7ioUX9aya?si=vO9P8qsJTm6ARYbi0hf1Xg

Lots of love,

Lisa


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Re: I released my first single
Reply #1 on: February 12, 2019, 08:17:51
Spotify only allows me to use it 14 days abroad.
Never knew that.
When I am back, I sure will listen to your music.
And if you sing loud enough Iíll hear you.
But Iíll listen, promise!
Kind regards, Gus


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Re: I released my first single
Reply #2 on: February 12, 2019, 08:22:22
Spotify only allows me to use it 14 days abroad.
Never knew that.
When I am back, I sure will listen to your music.
And if you sing loud enough Iíll hear you.

But Iíll listen, promise!
Kind regards, Gus

Strange, I didnít know that. Iím dutch so I donít know where youíre staying but Iíll try haha


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Re: I released my first single
Reply #3 on: February 12, 2019, 13:21:09
« Last Edit: February 13, 2019, 20:31:43 by LePlongeur »
Greater Amsterdam. Oftewel  along the A9 Haarlem to the direction of Utrecht/Almere...
The village that pretends to be a City.....
Lets say 15 to 20 kilometers.
Vriendelijke groet/kind regards, Gus


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Re: I released my first single
Reply #4 on: February 12, 2019, 16:52:12
hi @lynnalyx , nice to see you back in the kitchen :ok: Don't worry about your English, it seems very fine to me, but....hey i am Dutch too  ;D ;D ;D

for many people out here in the kitchen, i guess 40 to 50%, English is not their first language, but we get along, and in a way the English speaking members from kitchen can help to check and improve English lyrics...

i wanted to listen to your track but.... ::) ::) ::) i don't have a Spotify account  :P :P :P :-[ :-[ :-[

any chance you also release your track on Soundcloud?
me, myself, and Pie


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Re: I released my first single
Reply #5 on: February 12, 2019, 21:15:59
hi @lynnalyx , nice to see you back in the kitchen :ok: Don't worry about your English, it seems very fine to me, but....hey i am Dutch too  ;D ;D ;D

for many people out here in the kitchen, i guess 40 to 50%, English is not their first language, but we get along, and in a way the English speaking members from kitchen can help to check and improve English lyrics...

i wanted to listen to your track but.... ::) ::) ::) i don't have a Spotify account  :P :P :P :-[ :-[ :-[

any chance you also release your track on Soundcloud?

I think dutch people are actually quite good at English but they're very aware of their mistakes and therefor (therefor or therefore?) they are insecure. Writing lyrics is always a great challenge because you fall back to familiar words:(

I've just uploaded it to youtube:   too bad youtube doesn't let you run adds unless you have <1000 subs in one year.


Re: I released my first single
Reply #6 on: February 12, 2019, 21:38:51
Hi @linnalyx

I do not have a Spotify account! Sorry. :-[
I did not know that to live I had to die so many times
My Youtube channel:
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCAaK7mFK7fUpf1E99I1Qtow
My Vimeo Songs of Thought channel:
https://vimeo.com/channels/moraamarolaloba
My Vimeo Downtempo channel:
https://vimeo.com/channels/moramarolalobadowntempo


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Re: I released my first single
Reply #7 on: February 12, 2019, 21:51:56
I listened to the Youtube version. Your song has an infectious way about it....the way you sing, I think. I enjoyed listened a lot....but I wished I had lyrics to follow along with. ;)
"The main thing is to have a gutsy approach....but use your head." Julia Child

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Re: I released my first single
Reply #8 on: February 12, 2019, 22:06:04
I listened to the Youtube version. Your song has an infectious way about it....the way you sing, I think. I enjoyed listened a lot....but I wished I had lyrics to follow along with. ;)

Aah thank you! Iíll write the lyrics down for you:

White walls
Black in the dark
Dark walls
Painted by who?

Fish are swimming by
The shark is having a good time

White walls
Black in the dark
Dark walls
Painted by who?

Trees reaching the sky
Iím like a monkey trying to climb

Repeat verse 1+2

I want this world to end
I donít know what is real and what is fake itís killing me Iím tired canít you see? X2

Lalalala lalaa
Iím not listening or looking anymore X2

Repeat verse 3+4



Re: I released my first single
Reply #9 on: February 12, 2019, 22:15:47
Hola! @lynnalyx
I loved your song, I loved it a lot, a lot, a lot!!!
And your voice so special with your so special accent!!! wow. I am your fan, fan, fan  ::heart::  ::heart::


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Re: I released my first single
Reply #10 on: February 12, 2019, 22:21:14
Hola! @lynnalyx
I loved your song, I loved it a lot, a lot, a lot!!!
And your voice so special with your so special accent!!! wow. I am your fan, fan, fan  ::heart::  ::heart::

Aaaah my heart melts ::heart::


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Re: I released my first single
Reply #11 on: February 12, 2019, 22:30:28
I like these lyrics. They feel like a lucid dream.  ;)


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Re: I released my first single
Reply #12 on: February 13, 2019, 19:15:57
hi @lynnalyx , i listened via the youtube link now

thanks for that  :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

that is a great song in my opinion  ::thumb:: ::thumb:: ::thumb::
pretty awesome  ::headphone:: ::headphone:: ::headphone:: ::headphone:: ::headphone:: :yes: :yes: :yes:


Re: I released my first single
Reply #13 on: February 13, 2019, 19:27:20
@lynnalyx
This is so awesome! Your voice is so unique and mesmerizing and i loveeee your lyrics. i also like how it sounds when the harmonizing voices come in at times. nice beat, I love your song :)


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Re: I released my first single
Reply #14 on: February 13, 2019, 20:41:12
After first glance thereís always a chance of a second glance.
Or a second listen. Or a third.
I absolutely love your white wall!
Really am.
No reason to be shy. No reason at all.
I try to boost your self consciousness. How about a collab?
(What a subtle way to ask, huh?)
So, whatíll you post next???
Kind regards, Gus



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