• "I Too Was Loved"
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"I Too Was Loved"
on: November 26, 2017, 23:37:26
Okay, so I got a little sentimental over the holidays...started thinking about those I know and love who have lost a love. This is what came of it.

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I Too Was Loved

Touch, tender and warm soft as a tear carried on dreams
Held close to the heart, well within reach, real as it seems
In stillness it lingers, reminding I too was loved

Stars spilled in the night fell upon eyes born to reveal
Joys on the new day, honest as dawn never concealed
In stillness it lingers, reminding I too was loved

Love complete, love that burned
Freely given, always, always returned

A smile lifting the clouds, chasing the storm, calming all fear
Bathed deep in itís light, colors so true and sincere
In stillness it lingers, reminding I too was loved


Re: "I Too Was Loved"
Reply #1 on: November 27, 2017, 03:56:25
To me-  @Mr Sydney - this has a classic old timey feel. I have to admit that my eyes got a little misty. I imagine this one is tough to sing (even though you wrote it) but you did a good job in my estimation singing it.

Vince


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Re: "I Too Was Loved"
Reply #2 on: November 27, 2017, 06:45:36
Nice work @Mr Sydney .  This was a very pleasant listen.  Really Nice  ::thumb:: ::Suzy:: ::heart::


Re: "I Too Was Loved"
Reply #3 on: November 27, 2017, 12:50:00
Very nice. I love the delicate guitar work at the start.

This song resonates....listening again.
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Re: "I Too Was Loved"
Reply #4 on: November 27, 2017, 14:16:40
@Vince  Sorry about the misty eyes :)  Yeah, a bit of an emotional one, wasn't quite sure where it was taking me 'cause it kinda just spilled out.

@Knate   Many thanks for the listen and comment, much appreciated!

@Leonard Scaper   Thanks my man!  I guess a little bit of "resonating" is all we look for when we write these things. When I first played it for my sister-in-law she said  "I don't get it? I have NO IDEA what you were talking about until you mentioned love." So, I guess "resonating" doesn't happen for everyone on every song. Oh, well Thanks again for the feedback...always appreciated!


Re: "I Too Was Loved"
Reply #5 on: November 27, 2017, 14:26:32
Just wonderful lyrics so well expressed with that voice.  Love the finger picking backed up with he gentle strumming.  Really like this one!



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