I Will Fall For You - WIP

This is one I've been working on for a few weeks now.  I haven't been the happiest fella lately, so this one takes on a darker tone.  Although Im singing in the first person, this one isnt about me...well, technically, I'm the one who is being sung to.  I had an ex that was an emotionally manipualtive leech and the experience was so traumatizing that I still write songs about her all the time.  I feel like Adele in that way haha. 

The mix is my favorite one I've done recently, but there is still a lead guitar track to add so I'm posting it as a work-in-progress.  It's somewhere in the vein of early Black Sabbath and bluesy stoner rock.

Would love to hear any and all feedback from the Kitchen!

https://soundcloud.com/knate-official/i-will-fall-on-you

Lyrics:

a deep charade, this bed i've made
a long, slow, dark cascade
rivers flow but time stands still
devouring my jagged little pill
by time you see, its now too late
like Altas to the world, you carry my weight

Ill fall
I'll fall for you
then I will fall on you

like an escapade with a hand grenade
and a lullaby serenade
I'll sing it sweet and so discrete
and leave you like a bone without the meat

Trust in me, can't you see
That Im the only one you need

So much to like here @Knate.  This is should hard to ignore as it grabs our attention from the start. Everything is sounding so good here. A super lead vocal but then the guitar and bass cut through with ease and have great presence against the solid drum track. Pleased to meet your acquaintance my friend.

Paul

This is sounding good @Knate . Love the vocals. Watch the level of that guitar when you get the other one in there.....it feels a little too up front to me with the way you have the vocals positioned.

Love that bass in the middle and how you bring the vocals in after it.

Very cool........great sound!!