• If You Want To
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If You Want To
on: February 11, 2019, 12:07:47
Hey all!

Would love to get some general feedback on this track. This song is about an unexpected love coming into your life and saving you. Definitely one of my cheesiest ones. Came back to it after a while and thought why not see what people think.  :thumbsup:

Thanks !!
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https://soundcloud.com/micky-shiloah/if-you-want-to-2-11/s-MXCCY

Lyrics:
With the night sky falling all around us
I can feel it in the air
Something's happening
I never imagined

Can we stay in this forever?
Forever and ever
In a night like this
Together
together together

And you can take my hand
And we can fall in love
If you really, really want to
(you really, really want to)
And we can take our time
The world is yours and mine
And I really, really want to
I really, really want to

There's a fire burning all around us
I can barely breathe with you
I can feel it in my lungs
And I am never getting out of this alive

Can we stay in this forever?
Forever and ever
Just like this
Together
Together forever

And you can take my hand
And we can fall in love
If you really, really want to
(you really, really want to)
And we can take our time
The world is yours and mine
And I really, really want to
I really, really want to

I was waiting for you in the midnight hour
(to come and rescue me)
It was all or nothing
I gave you all the power
(to come and rescue me)

From my life
From my vicious cycle
Every day was the same day after all
Same time, same place, same elephant
Same black cloud dripping bullshit into my head

Every day waiting for the day
I'd wake up feeling different, yea
Same time, same place, same elephant
Same black cloud dripping bullshit into my head

And I can take your hand
And we can fall in love
If you really, really want to
You really, really want to

And we can take our time
The world is yours and mine
And I really, really want to
I really, really want to

I was waiting for you in the midnight hour
(to come and rescue me)
It was all or nothing
I gave you all the power
(to come and rescue me)

From my life
From my vicious cycle
Every day was the same day after all
Same time, same place, same elephant
Same black cloud dripping bullshit into my head

I was waiting for you in the midnight hour
(to come and rescue me)
It was all or nothing
I gave you all the power
(to come and rescue me)


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Re: If You Want To
Reply #1 on: February 11, 2019, 13:48:48
Hey Micky...this is perfectly cheesy. I mean....once you're in the cheese you need to go all the way.......and you definitely do. This song really starts to blossom amazingly at the 1:00 mark. It;'s the way you bring in those huge vocals.

I have missed hearing your stuff, man. This song sounds fantastic to my old ears.....lush and deep with lots of building dynamics. I even like the faded ending.
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Re: If You Want To
Reply #2 on: February 11, 2019, 21:29:36
This is really a very nice song! and I think the same as @Leonard Scaper, from this minute, everything acquires meaning, all the pieces are united and the song is born, taking you by the hand to the end.

I like a lot this :
"From my life
From my vicious cycle
Every day was the same day after all
Same time, same place, same elephant
Same black cloud dripping bullshit into my head"

great song @Mutrins
I did not know that to live I had to die so many times
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Re: If You Want To
Reply #3 on: February 12, 2019, 13:27:55
Nothing wrong with cheese Micky in this cynical world where everything is questioned.

If you take away singing about love and falling in love then what is left except misery so cheese away and make people smile.

Good Production as always and another confident performance.

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