• I'm new, tell me what you think
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I'm new, tell me what you think
on: February 17, 2019, 08:02:04
« Last Edit: February 17, 2019, 08:04:42 by Chiaroscuro, Darling »
Hi I'm new around here. This is an interesting forum. I'd really appreciate constructive criticism.
https://soundcloud.com/chiaroscurodarling/daintily-moonstruck

Give me a follow on the soundclouds, I'll get ya back.
Cheers!


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Re: I'm new, tell me what you think
Reply #1 on: February 17, 2019, 09:57:52
Hi @Chiaroscuro, Darling let me start with welcoming you to the kitchen  :pompom: :pompom: :pompom:

Thanks for joining  ::thumb:: ::thumb:: ::thumb::
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Re: I'm new, tell me what you think
Reply #2 on: February 17, 2019, 12:54:05
Beautiful tune! Definitely hearing a little Simon & Garfunkel influence.

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Re: I'm new, tell me what you think
Reply #3 on: February 17, 2019, 13:52:12
Hello @Chiaroscuro, Darling  welcome to the kitchen!  :)

Very nice track!
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Re: I'm new, tell me what you think
Reply #4 on: February 17, 2019, 18:32:38
« Last Edit: February 18, 2019, 04:11:09 by LePlongeur »
The voices make me very very happy. Your singing remind me of Curt Boettcher (as a result Kabbalah every now and than with one t or tt).

Apart from making the most beautiful things on his own, he (and Bones Howe) were responsible for producing Tne Association on their best work. Legendary. And deserved too.

Not for nothing itís called sunshine pop. And I can hear the sunshine all over the place when you sing.
And you publish your lyrics, good for us non native speakers.

If I would fall for guys I could fall in love with you. Now I only fall in love with your music.
Great!!! And welcome too!
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Re: I'm new, tell me what you think
Reply #5 on: February 17, 2019, 23:35:50
Hi,

Welcome! I really like your song and the mix is in balance. I love your love and the vibe the song gives. You could do really subtle strings in the background. Just an idea (:


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Re: I'm new, tell me what you think
Reply #6 on: February 18, 2019, 02:08:35
@Chiaroscuro, Darling Welcome!

Very nice song.  I a little Bon Iver influence perhaps?  My main critique would be to let your voice out more.  There were a few lines where it seemed obvious to me that you were holding back or unsure of yourself.  If you are feeling it, let it fly!


Re: I'm new, tell me what you think
Reply #7 on: February 20, 2019, 13:43:36
Welcome @Chiaroscuro, Darling!!

Your song has many colors, especially that of calmness. I think like @Leonard Scaper
It reminds me of Simon & Garfunkel, whose music I will always like.
Nice song. After a hectic morning, it made me land softly.
I like the sound  ::thumb:: ::thumb::
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