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I?m wondering new song idea
on: September 24, 2013, 09:34:19
« Last Edit: October 22, 2013, 06:43:49 by fischermans »
Hello best Songwriters ever
Yesterday I had a dream  ???  ;D no sorry I had an idea for a new song. Today I did a fast and rough recording with my iphone.First verse and chorus.All comments are welcome.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EUEwKQko3zI&feature=youtu.be
Alexander

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Re: I?m wondering new song idea
Reply #1 on: September 24, 2013, 18:47:49
Man that is so promising - I really love that mate

I couldn't catch all the lyrics

But it's awesome - the only slight concern I have is that there are 2-3 sections so I don't know if you want to think about refining the structure - John Lennon used to split ideas like this into 2-3 songs and develop the separate strands to get Hookier more streamlined efforts - I do this quite a lot 

But even I am not sure about that as it's just so lovely

Do you have a mic in from picking up the voice ? I really think that reverb effect you have suits your voice very well - infact I would buy a whole album of songs like this

I would add just a violin and maybe cello - keep it really simple

But you are on to something here  ;D


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Re: I?m wondering new song idea
Reply #2 on: September 24, 2013, 21:49:16
Hello Kafla
Thanks for your words.The lyrics are still not ready and because I?m not a native it?s probably good you couldn?t catch all of them. ;D
I think I won?t split it in this stadium. For me it is one song but I have to write second and third verse. So a bit work. I recorded this demo with my iphone so without any effect but I sung it in a big room.May the reverb sound is because of that.
Ok that was the private part.Now the business part. The album is 16,50 ?.Kitchen members get 20% and shipping costs are 5,- ?.All in all vey cheap isn?t it? ;D ;D
Just kidding.
If I ever make an album (chance is 0,05 % ) I would send it to every kitchen member for free. ;)
Alexander


Re: I?m wondering new song idea
Reply #3 on: October 10, 2013, 17:01:28
I'm with Kafla - put me down for a CD when you've recorded it. This one sounds just as good as everything else - it's that voice guitar combination; it's a killer. It's widescreen, cinemascope beautiful.


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Re: I?m wondering new song idea
Reply #4 on: October 13, 2013, 22:16:35
It?s only a good guitar I?m playing. ;)
Alexander



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