• In the oblivion of my flesh
  • Started by Mora Amaro La Loba
0 Members and 1 Guest are viewing this topic.
In the oblivion of my flesh
on: May 21, 2022, 20:39:05
Hola!!!
This song seems sad but it is not, it is looking at what is not there but is known to be there, waiting for the veil to fall.

I used an FX on the voice trying to give it that touch of a leaf that trembles with the movement of the air.

Mora







Sometimes
when I look back
I realize that Time
is an instant
after another
anothe another another

It just happens
and can shake your way
like that foot
that inthe road
kicks away a stone

And so launched
I'll fly
into mirror shards
in the space of my dreams
my dreams

Surrounded by that music
that one sings
to ward off fear
fear

Sometimes
I don't know why
I am still a draft

May be I can't change
what is born like this x2

May be may be may be
I'll find the missing chip
waiting for me
one more time

In the oblivion of my flesh
ReplyQuoteNotify
I did not know that to live I had to die so many times
https://vimeo.com/onacarom


Re: In the oblivion of my flesh
Reply #1 on: May 22, 2022, 17:33:12
It's a beautiful song. Mora @Mora Amaro La Loba . And I love the perfectly understated guitar work from your co-star, Marcus.
"The main thing is to have a gutsy approach....but use your head." Julia Child

 "In a world of robotic conformity, the only originality left in music is the imperfections" Eric Craptone

"Special thanks to Steve Gleason for making me who I am today." Leonard Scaper

Lenny's Tunes: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_music.cfm?bandID=540680


  • Mo
  • Chef de Partie
  • *

    • 828


    • 226
    • Yesterday at 15:27:36
  • more
Re: In the oblivion of my flesh
Reply #2 on: May 23, 2022, 22:52:23
Yes, this is clearly not a sad song.
Very nice, soft and lightly sung :)
I like the idea of Mora Draft
Sounds a bit like Lara Croft  , hm , well, in any case, you have just as much as Lara  ;D

By the way, I really like the fact that you always manage to bring across the slightly different nuances of your songs well in the video and of course Marcus is just GREAT!

 ::thumb:: ::thumb:: ::thumb:: ::thumb:: ::thumb::

@Mora Amaro La Loba


Re: In the oblivion of my flesh
Reply #3 on: May 24, 2022, 12:48:35
It's a beautiful song. Mora @Mora Amaro La Loba . And I love the perfectly understated guitar work from your co-star, Marcus.

Hola @Leonard Scaper
You always say very kind words in your comments on my songs.  I hope you are ok.

Mora


Re: In the oblivion of my flesh
Reply #4 on: May 24, 2022, 17:57:16
Hello Mora,

you know I love your kind of music, your videos too. I wouldn't have to write more if I hadn't defined a problem between vocals and music in the second verse. To me it didn't sound quite in harmony, but that may just be my taste, I don't know.

Since I'm a producer of music here in the kitchen, I could also imagine to give the musik itself, which is really absolutely great, sometimes a little more space by just taking a short vocal break. But this is, as always, only my opinion and taste.

But all this is complaining on a high level.

Otherwise, the track is really great as always.

Charly


Re: In the oblivion of my flesh
Reply #5 on: May 24, 2022, 18:59:45
Hello Mora,

you know I love your kind of music, your videos too. I wouldn't have to write more if I hadn't defined a problem between vocals and music in the second verse. To me it didn't sound quite in harmony, but that may just be my taste, I don't know.

Since I'm a producer of music here in the kitchen, I could also imagine to give the musik itself, which is really absolutely great, sometimes a little more space by just taking a short vocal break. But this is, as always, only my opinion and taste.

But all this is complaining on a high level.

Otherwise, the track is really great as always.

Charly

Hola @Charlys-Music
Yes, you are right  All my songs are actually a rehearsal. that's how I learn.
Mora


Re: In the oblivion of my flesh
Reply #6 on: May 26, 2022, 12:32:00
Yes, this is clearly not a sad song.
Very nice, soft and lightly sung :)
I like the idea of Mora Draft
Sounds a bit like Lara Croft  , hm , well, in any case, you have just as much as Lara  ;D

By the way, I really like the fact that you always manage to bring across the slightly different nuances of your songs well in the video and of course Marcus is just GREAT!

 ::thumb:: ::thumb:: ::thumb:: ::thumb:: ::thumb::


Hola @Mo
I can say only A BIG KISS FOR YOU!!!!! Thank you!!
Mora

@Mora Amaro La Loba



xx
sweet oblivion

Started by rightly on Lyrics

6 Replies
762 Views
Last post July 09, 2020, 17:31:39
by rightly
xx
sweet oblivion

Started by rightly on Songs for review

3 Replies
388 Views
Last post January 24, 2021, 22:01:43
by rightly
xx
"OBLIVION" live performance

Started by fischermans on Live performances

13 Replies
2207 Views
Last post June 16, 2016, 07:03:37
by fischermans
xx
"Oblivion" Lyrics for a new song

Started by fischermans on Lyrics

12 Replies
1361 Views
Last post May 30, 2016, 06:55:49
by fischermans