• Inertia - collaboration with Mo
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Inertia - collaboration with Mo
on: December 31, 2020, 14:52:50
« Last Edit: December 31, 2020, 15:33:04 by oorlab »
Hi fellow kitchensongwriters .
Here is for your reviewing pleasure
https://soundcloud.com/oorlab/inertia-mo-oorlab - collaboration with @Mo 
This is an unusually long track for what I am used to - might be useful, songwriting-wise, to edit it down to a bit shorter track.
Comments welcome.
Happy 2021
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Re: Inertia - collaboration with Mo
Reply #1 on: December 31, 2020, 18:21:56
Thank you for all @oorlab! Nice you posted it.

Here still the lyrics

Inertia

 Oh, how it does me sad
your recurring play of social rat
good lucky years you had
Abundance did fed you fat

Oh, how it does me sad
your recurring play of social rat
Fathered many kids you get
But know, whats drives me mad
Fathered many kids you get
But know, whats drives me mad

If resources running low you pray
forgotten love gives way gives way
forgotten love gives way
gives way

egoism fun whats count you say
provoke aggressions that will stay
egoism fun whats count you say
provoke aggressions that will stay
gives way
Comes bloody, not just may
Comes bloody, not just may

gives way

Don't pretend surprised actor
how nature solves this crowd factor
Makes no sense try to track her
and abuse won't stop her time reactor
no no
 Oh, how it does me sad
your recurring play of social rat
Comes bloody, not just may
Comes bloody, not just may

again she'll work
as crowd rat ejector
again she'll work
as crowd rat ejector

again she'll work
as crowd rat ejector
Oh daddy, not just may
Come daddy, let`s are play
Come daddy, let`s are play
Gives way


Re: Inertia - collaboration with Mo
Reply #2 on: January 01, 2021, 20:13:32
Hi fellow kitchensongwriters .
Here is for your reviewing pleasure
https://soundcloud.com/oorlab/inertia-mo-oorlab - collaboration with @Mo 
This is an unusually long track for what I am used to - might be useful, songwriting-wise, to edit it down to a bit shorter track.
Comments welcome.
Happy 2021

Hi both @oorlab @Mo

The mix sounds good, the voice of Mo suits perfectly with the general color of the track; may be the claps are a bit loud? And if adding another beat? Long? of course it could be shorter, yes.
When Orlab sings his voice could have a little bit of more volume...
The lyrics??? hmmm it would be fine to read them.

Happy New year and stay safe.

Mora
I did not know that to live I had to die so many times
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Re: Inertia - collaboration with Mo
Reply #3 on: January 03, 2021, 19:41:50
how cool! @oorlab and @Mo , Kraftwerk meets Talking heads  ::headphone:: ::headphone:: ::headphone::

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Re: Inertia - collaboration with Mo
Reply #4 on: January 03, 2021, 22:06:23
Thank you, @Dutchbeat for listen! ;)
Thats in interesting compare!! :yes:


Re: Inertia - collaboration with Mo
Reply #5 on: January 04, 2021, 07:07:52
Te gek!
I think it's great....and I love the length of the song, don't make it shorter.
 ::heart:: ::heart:: ::heart::
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Re: Inertia - collaboration with Mo
Reply #6 on: January 06, 2021, 00:27:42
Many thanks, Muchars Gracias @Goatrelated   - will keep it this length,
@Dutchbeat   - yes talking heads & Kraftwerk - a strong brew.
@Mora Amaro La Loba   - will revisit the mix to lower the handclaps, and up a bit the vocal, good call!


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Re: Inertia - collaboration with Mo
Reply #7 on: January 06, 2021, 09:41:12
I like the driving groove
still I think there's more potential to be realised here
voice is thoroughly rockstar!
and there are plenty guitar riffs that got to me

you should do more together!!



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Re: Inertia - collaboration with Mo
Reply #8 on: January 17, 2021, 11:39:12
« Last Edit: January 17, 2021, 12:12:05 by oorlab »
Many thanks, Muchars Gracias @Goatrelated   - will keep it this length,
@Dutchbeat   - yes Talking Heads & Kraftwerk - a strong brew.
@Mora Amaro La Loba   - will revisit the mix to lower the handclaps, and up a bit the vocal, good call!

@Mora Amaro La Loba  - have made a new mix - lowered the handclaps and upped the vocals.
https://soundcloud.com/oorlab/inertia-mo-oorlab many thanks for taking your time to listen and give feedback.


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Re: Inertia - collaboration with Mo
Reply #9 on: January 17, 2021, 13:09:14
Love it
Well done guys
we need a follow up collaboration!


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Re: Inertia - collaboration with Mo
Reply #10 on: Today at 14:05:01
I love the music on this one. Very cool...and then the guitars come in taking it all up a notch.👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻 The second vocal is definitely a little too quiet when itís not being a BV.
I do love the delivery of the main vocal, You have a lovely and interesting voice although If Iím being really honest I struggled to make out what was actually being sung.

Nice work guys.😄🎶👊🏻🎶



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