• It was cold
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It was cold
on: May 07, 2019, 16:35:05
« Last Edit: May 07, 2019, 16:41:34 by Mora Amaro La Loba »
Spring arrives with its promises and smells of open air and less fleeting light, of nests that bloom among the branches of the trees, of fluttering, whispers, songs and calls that look up to heaven, and amid so much upheaval I leave you a theme that speaks of silence and its cold emptiness.
This song-poem or poem-song is a part of a poetry from my collection, Woman's Secrets, framed by music that seems to melt at times, helped by the magnificent atmosphere of a guitar (@Marcus Nalgaber)  which is not guitar, but feeling.
I know that the video could be shorter but I got distracted listening.




It was cold
a dog barked at the night
ant the silence that remained
was still heavy

It was cold
it was cold
a dog barked at the night
and the silence
that remained was still heavy
heavy
heavy

It was cold
it was cold
and the snow that was falling
left flowers
with thorns
with thorns

The black and white merged
and the coming dawn give it its greyish tone
from its early glass
from its early glass
from its early glass.  x 2
I did not know that to live I had to die so many times
My Youtube channel:
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCAaK7mFK7fUpf1E99I1Qtow
My Vimeo Songs of Thought channel:
https://vimeo.com/channels/moraamarolaloba
My Vimeo Downtempo channel:
https://vimeo.com/channels/moramarolalobadowntempo


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Re: It was col
Reply #1 on: May 07, 2019, 16:47:12
I for one, wouldn’t ASK for a  shorter video. If you would choose to make it shorter, that is completely within you queenly reign over your artistic land.
Maybe I am a bit old fashioned. I love songs (and videos) that allow me to get acquainted with the language of the artist. Not language as in Spanish or english, but the handwriting, the thumb print. The thing that makes the artist his or her own.

And I love your work. 4’something” isn’t nearly too long. I love every second of it.
Kind regards, Gus


Re: It was cold
Reply #2 on: May 09, 2019, 12:06:59
« Last Edit: May 09, 2019, 20:15:59 by Mora Amaro La Loba »
Hi @LePlongeur
Yes, it's true, I enjoy reigning over myself. I am aware that my product is not commercial,
myself is  the only hook I offer.

Thanks for your words.


Re: It was cold
Reply #3 on: May 09, 2019, 13:39:37
wow ..........great production, even though this is not a kind of music I know much about,
 I am impressed by the sound of it. The repetitive way of you using words and "loops"
(are you working with loops???) fits the lyrics perfectly. Video is great!
I like it and has a vibe of Anne Clark to it.
XXXChris
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Re: It was cold
Reply #4 on: May 09, 2019, 13:46:35

I know that the video could be shorter but I got distracted listening.

not long enough.....I got distracted too ;-)


kwasr


Re: It was cold
Reply #5 on: May 09, 2019, 13:47:01
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Re: It was cold
Reply #6 on: May 09, 2019, 13:50:25
Nice experimental piece...still listening. I like the starkly contrasting visuals....very cool.
"The main thing is to have a gutsy approach....but use your head." Julia Child

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Re: It was cold
Reply #7 on: May 09, 2019, 20:01:16
Hi @Pleudoniem
Yes, it's true, I enjoy reigning over myself. I am aware that my product is not commercial,
myself is  the only hook I offer.

Thanks for your words.

@Mora Amaro La Loba  ???? Ok, but where did I say that then? I don't recall having commented on this work yet, and I never said anything about you not being commercial or reigning over yourself. Might you be confusing me with somebody else?

Ah! I already see. It was @LePlongeur you were referring to :)
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Re: It was cold
Reply #8 on: May 09, 2019, 20:37:39
Hi @Chris Spruit
Thank you!
Yes, I also work with loops, they are pure plastelina for me and I play with them as I do with the effects. I like to paint the air.

@Goatrelated
You and your way of being! Thank you very much.(No much time less for winter)  ::heart:: ::heart:: ::heart:: ::heart:: ::heart:: ::heart:: ::heart:: ::heart::

@Leonard Scaper
Thank you!
It is part of a poetry, a piece full of things, and although it is not a song itself, it is a sung description.

Hi @Pleudoniem
Well, it might look like a marketing system! hahaha
Sorry for the mistake and thanks for your comment.




Re: It was cold
Reply #9 on: May 09, 2019, 22:27:52
@Mora Amaro La Loba NOW I listened. The atmosphere of the song chillingly captures the tone setting. So, I think you've been quite successful here. An aquarelle of icy waters.


Re: It was cold
Reply #10 on: May 12, 2019, 14:53:36
Good job
Congratulations  ::thumb:: ::thumb:: ::thumb::


Re: It was cold
Reply #11 on: May 14, 2019, 11:30:15
@Mora Amaro La Loba NOW I listened. The atmosphere of the song chillingly captures the tone setting. So, I think you've been quite successful here. An aquarelle of icy waters.

Hi @Pleudoniem
Thank you for visiting me.


Re: It was cold
Reply #12 on: May 14, 2019, 11:30:55
Good job
Congratulations  ::thumb:: ::thumb:: ::thumb::

Thank you Marcus!!!  :pompom:



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