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JeZeBeL
on: March 27, 2019, 11:14:28
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         I wrote this for a loved one in troubled times
To this day I don't know if she appreciates the efforts I went to. Lol.

Feedback would be lovely.


The link.

https://soundcloud.com/rightly/jezebel


the lyrics. 



JeZeBeL


   if ever a devil was born                   
violent and rude, a star of the dawn             

   if ever an angel fell,
        it would be you,... JeZeBeL     

   if ever there were two eyes
 to take the blue from out of the sky
       giving me heaven and hell,
            in that same tune,... JeZeBeL

     the one and the only
   at times it gets lonely
soon she will know me... better

that's where it is, these are the parts
 this is my kiss n' here is my heart
   they say only time will tell
        if it is true,... JeZeBeL

       I'll  not be surprised
     if she tell me a lie
   I'm just glad t' have met her
the one and the only
     she also gets lonely
         now she will know me... better

   if ever an angel fell
 it would be you,... Jezebel
               JeZeBeL



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Re: JeZeBeL
Reply #1 on: March 27, 2019, 13:17:35
@Rightly your lyrics hooked me immediately - love them.  The music grabbed my curiosity, then pulled me in as if listening to your thoughts.  Very intriguing and unique.  Excellent.
Do what makes your heart sing :)


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Re: JeZeBeL
Reply #2 on: March 27, 2019, 16:17:47
The music grabbed my curiosity, then pulled me in as if listening to your thoughts.

What a great way to describe Rightly music!

This is a great set of lyrics......the lyrics and the music paint a picture.....
"The main thing is to have a gutsy approach....but use your head." Julia Child

 "In a world of robotic conformity, the only originality left in music is the imperfections" Eric Craptone

"Special thanks to Steve Gleason for making me who I am today." Leonard Scaper

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Re: JeZeBeL
Reply #3 on: March 27, 2019, 18:05:26
Hi @Rightly , a very nice song  :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:
the lyrics are very sad but also sound sort of....at peace with it

great songwriting  ::thumb:: ::thumb:: ::thumb:: ::thumb::

 
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Re: JeZeBeL
Reply #4 on: March 27, 2019, 20:39:43
Is this a cover, mate?  Aren't those  Frankie Laine lyrics?
I like the old time pub piano in the background and is that an orchestra packed into the snug?


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Re: JeZeBeL
Reply #5 on: March 28, 2019, 00:29:45
@Rightly your lyrics hooked me immediately - love them.  The music grabbed my curiosity, then pulled me in as if listening to your thoughts.  Very intriguing and unique.  Excellent.

thanks for your encouraging feedback. It really brighten my day.


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Re: JeZeBeL
Reply #6 on: March 28, 2019, 00:36:45
Is this a cover, mate?  Aren't those  Frankie Laine lyrics?
I like the old time pub piano in the background and is that an orchestra packed into the snug?

I'm glad you like the song buddy.
This is no cover. I rarely cover , I haven't the patience.
I'll check out Frankie Laine , he must be really good.  Lol.   


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Reply #7 on: March 28, 2019, 14:26:26
Hi @Rightly , a very nice song  :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:
the lyrics are very sad but also sound sort of....at peace with it

great songwriting  ::thumb:: ::thumb:: ::thumb:: ::thumb::

I'm not a practicing Buddhist but I do share the idea that the one constant in life is suffering. For me that's self evident.
I can't subscribe to the reincarnation idea though. That's a well intended gesture, a softener at best.

Glad you like the song.


Re: JeZeBeL
Reply #8 on: March 30, 2019, 13:53:53
Hi @Rightly

The beauty of sadness, that's what I call your songs. Nothing and everything is personal in your lyrics, you just cry for life.
Today I have a very romantic day.
Music always has your personal style.  ::thumb::
I did not know that to live I had to die so many times
My Youtube channel:
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCAaK7mFK7fUpf1E99I1Qtow
My Vimeo Songs of Thought channel:
https://vimeo.com/channels/moraamarolaloba
My Vimeo Downtempo channel:
https://vimeo.com/channels/moramarolalobadowntempo


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Re: JeZeBeL
Reply #9 on: April 03, 2019, 18:21:53
Hi @Rightly

The beauty of sadness, that's what I call your songs. Nothing and everything is personal in your lyrics, you just cry for life.
Today I have a very romantic day.
Music always has your personal style.  ::thumb::

Yes, Mora. I see it that way too.
I'm glad you enjoyed the song.
It's difficult for me to comment on my style (or absence thereof), without it sounding pretentious or without it being misleading.

I try to hit most of the notes, and I rarely try to do anything that strikes me as unnatural. 

Thanks for commenting.