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Jrogan - New Moon
on: September 01, 2015, 23:44:05
Wrote this last week. Again recorded on Iphone in one take.

https://soundcloud.com/jrogan/new-moon


There's a new moon tonight
Daring you to look away
Some can't seem to find the light
so they never seem to stay

Oh how the world is young
just a flicker in the dark
Too late to change for it is done
only time to leave a mark

New Moon another chance to make amends
New Moon another start another end
New Moon another look to you I will lend
New Moon Nice to see you my old friend

There's a better day to come
Believe when i say i know
You just need to find the sun
Then all your gifts will grow

Oh how the streets close in
just a arms length wide
its getting hard to breathe again
Oh if only i had you by my side

New Moon another chance to make amends
New Moon another start another end
New Moon another look to you I will lend
New Moon Nice to see you my old friend

Harmonica

New Moon another chance to make amends
New Moon another start another end
New Moon another look to you I will lend
New Moon Nice to see you my old friend


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Re: Jrogan - New Moon
Reply #1 on: September 02, 2015, 10:37:49
Hi Jrogan,

i think your recording with your i-Phone sounds really good....and i love the song, needless to say the harmonica with the guitar, but also the singing melody in the chorus reminds of Bob Dylan. Just great stuff this, keep the music coming!!!!

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Re: Jrogan - New Moon
Reply #2 on: September 04, 2015, 07:39:19
Hello Jrogan
Very good song.Like the lyrics and also the guitar and harmonica work. Little criticism is the not always perfect singing but you wrote the song 1 week ago so not many practice. ;)
Alexander


Re: Jrogan - New Moon
Reply #3 on: September 08, 2015, 12:17:08
Unbelievable how good it sounds with an IPhone hahaha It?s a good song but the harmonica I find very disturbing. Does degradation to the song I think.

Love the guitar though.

Nice song.

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