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Killer
on: April 19, 2017, 12:32:46
Hey guys,

I've got a song called "Killer" and would love some feedback. It's an interesting little ditty lol

Thanks so much!
Micky

https://soundcloud.com/micky-shiloah/killer-9-26-3

Lyrics:
I'm getting kind of wasted looking at you
Won't you take me up to your hotel room
We can have some fun not knowing me and you
So let's give it a run give me 4, 3, 2...
(one, one, one)
 
Now we can keep it classy if you really want to
Or we can f*ck around if you're feeling in the mood
baby sit down in this chair and let me blindfold you
Now don't you peak
I'm a freak like you
 
Didn't your mama tell you not to trust strangers?
Especially strange men who are looking at you
With a drink in their hand
This was a bad idea but it could have been worse
I'm not gonna hurt you--But I'm taking your purse
 
Chorus:
Cuz I'm not a killer
I'm just a bad bad boy
Currently unemployed
So I gotta do what I gotta do
But I'm not a killer
I just take what I need to take
And I make sure to mind my P's and Q's
I apologize and thank you
I'm not a killer
 
You're smoking a cigar walking in NoBu Malibu
I'm looking at your car dipped in that baby blue
You know that color would go perfect with my Golden Goose shoes
I'm making me a plan gimme 4,3,2
(give me one, give me one)
 
I approach with a smile "Hello sir, how are you?"
"Leave the keys in the car i'll park it safely for you"
I sense a hesitation for a second or two
But he gives me a nod and I tell him "Thank you"
 
Now didn't your daddy tell you always trust your gut?
Listen to your belly cuz it knows what's what
It's super f*cking telling
It said "bad idea", did you listen? No.
But it's ok...you can Uber home.
 
Chorus repeats


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Re: Killer
Reply #1 on: April 19, 2017, 17:11:50
Hi @Mutrins,

I really like this. Great lyric. Makes me think of early Prince. Probably a bit too edgy for mainstream acceptance, but fuck 'em if they can't take a joke :) Right?

"To live outside the law you must be honest" Dylan said. I see this as a portrait of a man who walks the the walk even though it's not "politically correct".

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Stan
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Re: Killer
Reply #2 on: April 20, 2017, 11:26:45
A very cool tune with perfectly edgy lyrics.....I tend to agree with @smajor .....joke 'em if they can't take a......wait, I think I got that wrong.

Anyway.......this tune starts right out with music that is ominous, driving and edgy and it doesn't ever let up. Hey...this is the 21st century, right?
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Re: Killer
Reply #3 on: April 20, 2017, 21:18:27
Hi @Mutrins,

I really like this. Great lyric. Makes me think of early Prince. Probably a bit too edgy for mainstream acceptance, but fuck 'em if they can't take a joke :) Right?

"To live outside the law you must be honest" Dylan said. I see this as a portrait of a man who walks the the walk even though it's not "politically correct".

Later,
Stan

Love that quote! and yes it might be too edgy but in the end I just have to make what I make. This song is fun to me so it's all good.

Thank you for your comments :)

Micky


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Re: Killer
Reply #4 on: April 20, 2017, 21:19:08
A very cool tune with perfectly edgy lyrics.....I tend to agree with @smajor .....joke 'em if they can't take a......wait, I think I got that wrong.

Anyway.......this tune starts right out with music that is ominous, driving and edgy and it doesn't ever let up. Hey...this is the 21st century, right?

haha joke em for sure!

Thanks so much! Not too worried if someone can't handle the content, I think it's fun!

I appreciate it :)
Micky



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