Leaving home

Hello guys,

I have a new song with kind of a bittersweet feel. If you have any critisism or feedback I would be glad to read it
You can find it below links.

https://soundcloud.com/onebedroom/leaving-home

@hondz1k  - enchanting sweet piano sting piece. My tip / advice would be to write some lyrics and get someone to sing it.

 

Wonderfully delicate piece! I agree with @oorlab that it is begging for vocals.

Wonderful and sensitive and one more vote for vocals.
Sorry if it’s taking a turn you had not in mind when you started it.
Kind regards, Gus

I am not sure it needs any vocals. I have heard quite a bit of Ryuichi Sakamoto's work, and he does things quite like this. Admittedly, when he invited David Sylvian to sing the words to Forbidden Colours, the piece changed character. So, the people asking for a vocal may be right, not because it would make the song better, but it would give it a different character.

  @hondz1k

that is very delicate 

super   

@hondz1k