• Leaving home
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Leaving home
on: January 15, 2021, 07:53:19
Hello guys,

I have a new song with kind of a bittersweet feel. If you have any critisism or feedback I would be glad to read it :)
You can find it below links.

https://soundcloud.com/onebedroom/leaving-home


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Re: Leaving home
Reply #1 on: January 19, 2021, 19:00:03
@hondz1k  - enchanting sweet piano sting piece. My tip / advice would be to write some lyrics and get someone to sing it.


Re: Leaving home
Reply #2 on: January 21, 2021, 23:32:41
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Re: Leaving home
Reply #3 on: January 22, 2021, 20:00:02
Wonderfully delicate piece! I agree with @oorlab that it is begging for vocals.
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Re: Leaving home
Reply #4 on: January 23, 2021, 08:04:00
Wonderful and sensitive and one more vote for vocals.
Sorry if itís taking a turn you had not in mind when you started it.
Kind regards, Gus


Re: Leaving home
Reply #5 on: January 25, 2021, 20:19:18
I am not sure it needs any vocals. I have heard quite a bit of Ryuichi Sakamoto's work, and he does things quite like this. Admittedly, when he invited David Sylvian to sing the words to Forbidden Colours, the piece changed character. So, the people asking for a vocal may be right, not because it would make the song better, but it would give it a different character.
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Re: Leaving home
Reply #6 on: January 25, 2021, 20:58:56
 ::headphone:: ::headphone:: ::headphone:: ::headphone:: @hondz1k

that is very delicate  :yes: :yes: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:
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Re: Leaving home
Reply #7 on: January 25, 2021, 21:00:03
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