• Like a moonless night - something disturbing?
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Like a moonless night - something disturbing?
on: December 19, 2019, 21:51:03
This song is very special to me, I find it has something distrubing despite its calm beauty.

I had problems fixing the level of the piano but finally I decided put it like it is now, it was the same with the wonderful guitar of Marcus but I think the lyrics are the important here as well as the way of singing them.




I like the red
I like lilac
I like green and yellow
but i am dark
like a moonless night

I like blue
I like ocher
I like orange and gray
but i am dark
like a moonless night
a moonless night

I like to dive in the shadows
until to find that light that makes itself
to illuminate certain senses
of death and life
there suspended
in the void of my thinking

I love the dark
it makes me look for light
even a simple point
breaking the black
 
void void
you ask so much
you ask so much
I did not know that to live I had to die so many times
https://vimeo.com/onacarom


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Re: Like a moonless night - something disturbing?
Reply #1 on: December 19, 2019, 23:56:11
@Mora Amaro La Loba 
the drums sound very good. The minimal jazz feel and the mysterious key sounds really work well.
In the last part a guitar solo could be interesting to try out
The ending is quite sudden  - the fade out might be extended
recommending https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/How_Music_Works "How music works", book by David Byrne.


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Re: Like a moonless night - something disturbing?
Reply #2 on: December 20, 2019, 15:52:23
@Mora Amaro La Loba , what a fantastic production  :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

awesome, at the 0.48 seconds mark when that very nice synth sound came in, you totally got me  ::headphone:: ::headphone:: ::headphone::

lovely, the lyrics  :ok:, that beat  :ok: the video  :ok: the overall production and sound  :thumbsup: :thumbsup:


btw, this is perfect as it is....but this song and the sounds could also be turned in a disco version perhaps...i think it could be a hypnotic dance track kind of thing with these hypnotizing vocal lines

me, myself, and Pie


Re: Like a moonless night - something disturbing?
Reply #3 on: December 21, 2019, 17:48:46
@Mora Amaro La Loba 
the drums sound very good. The minimal jazz feel and the mysterious key sounds really work well.
In the last part a guitar solo could be interesting to try out
The ending is quite sudden  - the fade out might be extended

Hola @oorlab

Thank you... Yes, lately my endings are quite sudden... The sound that appears accompanying my voice is a guitar mixed with an experimental sound by Marcus.
Merry Christmas!!!


Re: Like a moonless night - something disturbing?
Reply #4 on: December 21, 2019, 17:52:17
« Last Edit: December 22, 2019, 15:02:24 by Mora Amaro La Loba »
@Mora Amaro La Loba , what a fantastic production  :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

awesome, at the 0.48 seconds mark when that very nice synth sound came in, you totally got me  ::headphone:: ::headphone:: ::headphone::

lovely, the lyrics  :ok:, that beat  :ok: the video  :ok: the overall production and sound  :thumbsup: :thumbsup:


btw, this is perfect as it is....but this song and the sounds could also be turned in a disco version perhaps...i think it could be a hypnotic dance track kind of thing with these hypnotizing vocal lines


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Your nick shows your tastes... I love a lot how they sound dutch beats hahahaha
Yes, you are right, why not? For now I have another feeling... but tomorrow..?

Feliz Navidad, Merry Christmas!!!! ::smiley:: ::smiley:: ::smiley:: ::smiley:: ::dj:: ::dj:: ::dj::

I am preparing a new track with wonderful and catching rhythms...


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Re: Like a moonless night - something disturbing?
Reply #5 on: December 22, 2019, 08:32:04
Feliz Navidad to you and Marcus!!!
Another mysterious song! Love it!
Kind regards, Gus


Re: Like a moonless night - something disturbing?
Reply #6 on: December 23, 2019, 16:18:18
Feliz Navidad to you and Marcus!!!
Another mysterious song! Love it!
Kind regards, Gus


Hi @LePlongeur

Thank you very much for your Spanish words!!! Happy you liked my song!!! Cheersssss


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Re: Like a moonless night - something disturbing?
Reply #7 on: December 24, 2019, 11:00:08
Hola!

I like this piece of yours as well very much. I like the delicate music combined with your nice voixe here most.  The lyrics are simple but effective subtile :-)
great clip work also of course! :-)


Re: Like a moonless night - something disturbing?
Reply #8 on: December 26, 2019, 14:23:50
Holi @Mo
Thank you!!!! You are very kind, keep on doing small things with great love!!!!
I think it's a very special song.
 ::heart:: ::heart:: ::heart::
Mora


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Re: Like a moonless night - something disturbing?
Reply #9 on: December 27, 2019, 00:53:30
Some of the darker lyrics I`ve heard fromyou @Mora Amaro La Loba , but there`s still a journey "to find that light that makes itself" which balances.
You`re sense of rhythm pared to a very basic arrangement is apparent here . It`ll be fun to hear the disco version if that`s where you`re going but I like this the way it is.

Robert


Re: Like a moonless night - something disturbing?
Reply #10 on: December 28, 2019, 07:39:26
Beautiful!
 
I love the dark
it makes me look for light


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Re: Like a moonless night - something disturbing?
Reply #11 on: December 30, 2019, 20:41:34
Hi @robertkc

Muchas gracias!!! Thank you very much! I like very much this kind of style with a so basic arrangement, I feel it makes me free of many things... But there are songs and songs.

I wish you and yours a new year full of love, health, work and illusion. :pompom: :pompom: :pompom: :pompom:


Hola @Goatrelated

"I love the dark
it makes me look for light"

I like it too, it's the beginning of the trip.
Thank you very much and have a very nice New Year's Eve  and a wonderful new year!!!  ::heart:: ::heart:: ::heart:: ::heart:: ::heart::

Un gros bisou!!!!!!!!!


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Re: Like a moonless night - something disturbing?
Reply #12 on: January 03, 2020, 02:00:59
Great song @Mora Amaro La Loba - I really like this stripped back approach.

It really lets the vocals stand out and has a great atmosphere.

Another great song and video from you.

cheers


Re: Like a moonless night - something disturbing?
Reply #13 on: January 03, 2020, 19:26:00
Great song @Mora Amaro La Loba - I really like this stripped back approach.

It really lets the vocals stand out and has a great atmosphere.

Another great song and video from you.

cheers

Hola @Jurgen
Thank you, I like the so intimate vocals here. Have a very good 2020!! :pompom:



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