• Like a paper
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Like a paper
on: June 13, 2019, 20:26:21
I do not know why but I love this song, at least its history full of possible mysteries and secrets ... So much so that I've done it twice!!!

This version that I leave here today has a different style than the first time I did it and I really do not know which one to stay with.

What do you think. Which one do you like the most? The  second version  (the first link)




or the first version (which I find very, very long)







Do you know?
Do you know?

Your so strange love
kills me every day
a little more
a little more

I die in your eyes
in your hands
in your kisses

In your mouth
in your breath
in your all

like a daisy dies
in the hands
of who looks for love
of who looks for love

The days
when you are sad
my dreams melt
like a paper
in the water
of your sadness

Do you know?
do you know?

Your so strange love
kills me every day
a little more
a little more

I die in your eyes
in your hands
in your kisses

In your mouth
in your breath
in your all

like a daisy dies
in the hands
of who looks for love
of who lools for love
I did not know that to live I had to die so many times
My Youtube channel:
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCAaK7mFK7fUpf1E99I1Qtow
My Vimeo Songs of Thought channel:
https://vimeo.com/channels/moraamarolaloba
My Vimeo Downtempo channel:
https://vimeo.com/channels/moramarolalobadowntempo


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Re: Like a paper
Reply #1 on: June 13, 2019, 21:33:33
 :thumbsup: :thumbsup: @Mora Amaro La Loba , i like both versions,

but i think the first link in your post (the newest version) is superior
and the new video is adding to that also
awesome  :o :o :o
great songproject  ::thumb:: ::thumb:: ::thumb:: ::thumb:: ::thumb:: ::thumb::

 
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Re: Like a paper
Reply #2 on: June 14, 2019, 01:50:18
I agree with @Dutchbeat - both versions have something but the newer version sounds better quality and has a really interesting video.

And thinking about it - the newer one is also more unique. The older one has a much more generic 12 bar feel to it and there's nothing wrong with that other than you have a unique sound and style which I think it suits the newer version much better.

cheers


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Re: Like a paper
Reply #3 on: June 14, 2019, 09:56:37
The second one is the better of the two in my opinion.

As @Jurgen said, it also has more of your unique song personality that we expect from you with your music. It 'fits' better.

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Re: Like a paper
Reply #4 on: June 14, 2019, 21:16:29
@Mora Amaro La Loba I agree that your new recording of this song is  more unique and better matches the feel of the lyrics.
The production and capture of your voice is very good on the new version... not sure why, but listening to your voice reminds me of the solo work the Velvet Underground`s Nico did . Rich with texture and mysterious, memorable phrasing.

Robert


Re: Like a paper
Reply #5 on: June 15, 2019, 12:58:31
« Last Edit: June 15, 2019, 13:19:52 by Mora Amaro La Loba »
:thumbsup: :thumbsup: @Mora Amaro La Loba , i like both versions,

but i think the first link in your post (the newest version) is superior
and the new video is adding to that also
awesome  :o :o :o
great songproject  ::thumb:: ::thumb:: ::thumb:: ::thumb:: ::thumb:: ::thumb::

Hola @Dutchbeat

Gracias, many thanks... You always have words of encouragement for others ...


Re: Like a paper
Reply #6 on: June 15, 2019, 13:10:10
I agree with @Dutchbeat - both versions have something but the newer version sounds better quality and has a really interesting video.

And thinking about it - the newer one is also more unique. The older one has a much more generic 12 bar feel to it and there's nothing wrong with that other than you have a unique sound and style which I think it suits the newer version much better.

cheers

Hola @Jurgen
Yes, I think the same... Thank you very much. Many times I feel self-conscious about my accent and it is for this reason that when someone comments positively on my songs I am very happy.


Re: Like a paper
Reply #7 on: June 15, 2019, 13:11:30
The second one is the better of the two in my opinion.

As @Jurgen said, it also has more of your unique song personality that we expect from you with your music. It 'fits' better.

 ::OSMAN:: ::OSMAN:: ::OSMAN::

Thanks to you too @MrBouzouki  and I tell you the same thing as to @Jurgen. Muchas gracias.


Re: Like a paper
Reply #8 on: June 15, 2019, 13:15:01
@Mora Amaro La Loba I agree that your new recording of this song is  more unique and better matches the feel of the lyrics.
The production and capture of your voice is very good on the new version... not sure why, but listening to your voice reminds me of the solo work the Velvet Underground`s Nico did . Rich with texture and mysterious, memorable phrasing.

Robert

Muchas gracias @robertkc
You are very, very kind.


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Re: Like a paper
Reply #9 on: June 16, 2019, 00:03:47
Hi. 
If you're doing this all yourself then I think you're extraordinarily talented.
I prefer the first (the one placed above the other) of the two, but why not keep both?
The first seems more sophisticated.


Re: Like a paper
Reply #10 on: June 18, 2019, 22:04:24
Hi. 

...I prefer the first (the one placed above the other) of the two, but why not keep both?
The first seems more sophisticated.

Hi @Rightly hahaha Why not? but... feeling changes like the light. Thank you very much for watching and commenting.



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