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Offline irwin

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Living
« on: May 17, 2018, 23:03:02 »
This is my latest track that I have produce. I've done this track with the intention of submitting it to a music producer to have it played on one of his annual jazz shows. Need feedback

https://soundcloud.com/irwin-abrigo/living

Offline Leonard Scaper

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Re: Living
« Reply #1 on: May 17, 2018, 23:20:08 »
This has a nice free form mellow feel to it.
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Re: Living
« Reply #2 on: May 18, 2018, 16:48:41 »
Thanks for sharing.  This was a fun song to listen to.  Not sure I have any specific feedback or commentary on production, since this is not really my style.

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Re: Living
« Reply #3 on: May 20, 2018, 10:32:18 »
Nice happy song, interesting motifs and ideas. As you asked for feedback, I think you need to develop it a bit more to maximise listener interest. Enjoyed it though.
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Offline irwin

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Re: Living
« Reply #4 on: May 20, 2018, 19:01:06 »
Thanks for sharing.  This was a fun song to listen to.  Not sure I have any specific feedback or commentary on production, since this is not really my style.

Hi Author, It doesn't matter if it is not your style, I am thankful just to have you listen and making the effort to comment on my song. I do appreciate that.

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Re: Living
« Reply #5 on: May 20, 2018, 19:07:54 »
This has a nice free form mellow feel to it.

Hi Leonard, Thanks for listening. Thanks for the reply.


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