• love is making justice a game
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love is making justice a game
on: December 27, 2018, 14:36:53
I wrote this song about a year ago.
Feedback appreciated.

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The lyrics.

            love  is  making  justice a  game

       I don't want to hurt anyone
     I have to do something with this pain
           I'm angry in a gentle way
      Smoke was playing in the air
      I lit a candle with the greatest care
             as quiet as not being there

     everything is remembered in hate
     and love is making justice a game

     the truth defends any criminal
  you don't have to see it that way too
 but I could not find exception to this rule
    today I'm giving more than I'll forget
  the blood has dried the hurting hasn't started yet
      I'm falling down a slide it's getting wet

   everything is remembered in hate
  and love is making justice a game
    memories won't even go halfway
     I'll curse you and be glad that you came

  and love is making justice a game
and love is making justice a game


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Re: love is making justice a game
Reply #1 on: December 27, 2018, 16:31:48
The raw performance style here really brings out an interesting emotion from this story line. I'll need a few more listens to get to that emotion.
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