• Lullabies For My Nemesis ('Magic Words' Challenge)
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Re: Lullabies For My Nemesis ('Magic Words' Challenge)
Reply #15 on: June 08, 2019, 17:43:22
Thanks @realkevm  ::headphone

(Hope youíll find my next songs to be a little easier to digest. Iím gonna try some other genres again.)

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Re: Lullabies For My Nemesis ('Magic Words' Challenge)
Reply #16 on: June 12, 2019, 14:18:15
Gosh, what a tremendous amount of work went into this, @Layerson! And well worth it.  :) Fascinating & unusual 'story', lots of memorable lines. Really nice buildup in the music & the mood throughout.  I especially like the bridge, and could imagine a whole other lyric emerging from it.
You did well with the choice of 'magic words'.  ;)

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Re: Lullabies For My Nemesis ('Magic Words' Challenge)
Reply #17 on: June 12, 2019, 16:33:01
  :dance:  :makeitup:  :pompom:

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Re: Lullabies For My Nemesis ('Magic Words' Challenge)
Reply #18 on: June 12, 2019, 19:59:56
@Layerson rockin man blew me socks off!
fly away and find my peace of mind...
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Re: Lullabies For My Nemesis ('Magic Words' Challenge)
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Re: Lullabies For My Nemesis ('Magic Words' Challenge)
Reply #20 on: June 13, 2019, 11:25:48
Wow Micke, what an awesome song!!
You have an amazing voice, you remind me a little of Suggs (Madness)
Very cool! Well done, I love it :)


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Re: Lullabies For My Nemesis ('Magic Words' Challenge)
Reply #21 on: June 13, 2019, 14:53:57
Thanks very much @Susantaylor  :)


Re: Lullabies For My Nemesis ('Magic Words' Challenge)
Reply #22 on: June 17, 2019, 06:10:35
Hey @Layerson  ... you are really developing a unique style now! Congratulations!
You're vocal delivery is smoother than ever, the multiple time signatures are crazy cool and you've got just the right amount of  "heavy" to match the wording of the song.
Seriously, well done!
Good show!
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November Sound is based on the Mother, Father & Son musical trio of Melissa, Bill & Will. I'm the father so anything I post will have my wife singing and/or my son playing percussion.


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Re: Lullabies For My Nemesis ('Magic Words' Challenge)
Reply #23 on: June 17, 2019, 08:09:34
Thank you @Bill from November Sound  ::headphone::

The amount of thoughts made and decisions taken in this song was something I wasnít prepared for. It has made me realize how much more time goes into music making and it summed up pretty much what Iíve learned so far. I appreciate you (and everyone else) taking some of your time and listening in, noticing the different nuances that were the result of all the time put into this one. Did so many retakes on the vocals (... 3 completely different versions of the song, the first two made me laugh and had me worried so the final version was a relief. My co-worker Johan made some wise suggestions...) and everything else was opted in and out and still there was stuff that could be improved. Yet, I feel proud of what came out of all the anguish and late hours.

Again, very much appreciated  :)

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Re: Lullabies For My Nemesis ('Magic Words' Challenge)
Reply #24 on: July 01, 2019, 14:54:43
I would have totally given you 4 points for this @Layerson but alas I was limited to 3 points max per vote Ö.. oh well.
Again - awesome job!
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Re: Lullabies For My Nemesis ('Magic Words' Challenge)
Reply #25 on: July 01, 2019, 17:03:30
Thanks @Bill from November Sound  ::headphone::

With so many great songs in this challenge itís going to be a close one. Iím delighted I was awarded with a platonic extra point though  :blackgrin:

 ::Rachel::
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Re: Lullabies For My Nemesis ('Magic Words' Challenge)
Reply #26 on: July 03, 2019, 19:02:22
This is a smoking track.  My only crit is the Pre-Chorus is super long.  But that would be for me stylistically, so it works really well here.

You threw everything in this one and every instrument has it's place.

Great job



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