• Make you Stay
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Re: Make you Stay
Reply #1 on: March 18, 2017, 23:39:39
Really enjoyed the warm vocal delivery and your voice on this.  Something about the simple guitar vocal set up that makes the song feel fresh and honest.  Really enjoyed this!


Re: Make you Stay
Reply #2 on: March 18, 2017, 23:58:51
Very nice......

It's a good song with a very honest performance. Nice secondary vocals as well.

Really enjoyed listening to this. Welcome to The Kitchen.

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Re: Make you Stay
Reply #3 on: March 19, 2017, 00:52:37
Hey @Alex , that sounds beautiful, wow! I'd love to read along, would you mind sharing the lyrics?
What a beautiful voice and I love your guitar skills.. The song sticks in my head, wow, well done!
And of course welcome to the kitchen!! May I invite you to introduce yourself in the 'Me' section so we all get to know you a bit better?
Thanks for sharing your song!
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Re: Make you Stay
Reply #4 on: March 19, 2017, 12:06:51
« Last Edit: March 19, 2017, 22:12:11 by Alex »
Thank you for the positive feedback @Rabidparrot , @LeonardScraper and @Mar T!  :)

Mar T, I do not mind sharing the lyrics at all, I will post them on Soundcloud shortly! Thank you for the welcome and I will introduce myself on the 'me' section also.

Thank you again for taking the time to listen and comment  ::thumb:: ::thumb::


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Re: Make you Stay
Reply #5 on: March 19, 2017, 12:10:42
Hi @Alex

welcome tot the kitchen! I will listen to your song later

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Re: Make you Stay
Reply #6 on: March 19, 2017, 12:59:47
Very beautiful! I would love to see the lyrics


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Re: Make you Stay
Reply #7 on: March 19, 2017, 14:38:12
I have now uploaded the lyrics to the song's description on Soundcloud! Enjoy!  ::thumb:: ::thumb::


Re: Make you Stay
Reply #8 on: March 19, 2017, 15:11:00
Beautiful !!  ::heart::
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Re: Make you Stay
Reply #9 on: March 19, 2017, 15:52:19
Quite perfect - wouldn't touch it anymore. Makes one curious for the rest and how this would sound live.
recommending https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/How_Music_Works "How music works", book by David Byrne.


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Re: Make you Stay
Reply #10 on: March 19, 2017, 17:01:22
Thank you @Goatie and @oorlab for the lovely feedback!


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Re: Make you Stay
Reply #11 on: March 20, 2017, 08:18:47
What a lovely song! ::headphone::
Beautiful voice, very nice guitar playing, gorgeous subtle harmonies, great sound!
If I had to criticise anything I'd mention the noises in the background, especially in the beginning. But actually they didn't really bother me at all. They kind of make it feel even more authentic and intimate...
Very well done! Karma!


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Re: Make you Stay
Reply #12 on: March 20, 2017, 14:17:49
@Alex ,

What a breath of fresh air! Loved everything about it, especially those vocals.  ::headphone::

The whole sound is very easy on the ears, quite comfortable and relaxing, to me. However, I must say that the clarity/brightness might be a little on the weak side.

It's on repeat ;D
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Re: Make you Stay
Reply #13 on: March 20, 2017, 14:52:53
Thank you @Mark Luto, I am going to try and make the recording/mixing better as I produce new content - have a lot to learn!  :)

Thank you @ImKeN, great to hear you enjoyed it - will work on the clarity also!  :)


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Re: Make you Stay
Reply #14 on: March 21, 2017, 02:13:21
beautiful voice, lyrics and melody. really nice when the harmonies come in.

I really love this. Would love to hear it with full on production but I love how raw this is.

You've got some serious talent here. Give me and iTunes link and I will purchase :)




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