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Me to You
on: November 17, 2018, 19:34:17
just a song I added to participate  in the forums

, just a little thing I wrote. sometimes the things in life leave a residue.




We took those chances ...Baby"   
so I am writng to you,
I better send this in a message
its the best thing to do.
...just a thought on my way home...   

CHORUS:

"love was so natural...we made it so hard
love was a simple easy thing...and we tore it apart.
you know I`m all over you...don`t you? 
but we will never be through
this is from me to you...  tell me...how deep is that blue."

v2
Sometimes in the silence "baby
I`ll have a thought of you
I know why we never made it
but that was me not you...
hope you don`t mind ...I send this note too.

bridge;
we loved we lost
we buried some hearts
 we made it through
but I thought....

Chorus
"love was so natural...we made it so hard
love was a simple easy thing...and we tore it apart.
you know I`m all over you....don`t you?
but we will never be through
this is from me to you....how deep is that blue."

this from me to you...how deep is that blue."

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Re: Me to You
Reply #1 on: November 17, 2018, 20:38:41
What a great tune! That chorus with those harmonies hits just right. Love your voice.

Quality work here.
"The main thing is to have a gutsy approach....but use your head." Julia Child

 "In a world of robotic conformity, the only originality left in music is the imperfections" Eric Craptone

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Reply #2 on: November 17, 2018, 21:32:38
Thanks Leonard, I`ll tell my friend, He is responsible for the vocals and the arrangement.
I am  responsible for the lyric and melody. when I handed this to him, it was just me and a guitar.
and that sounds way different.    ::e-guitar3::   thanks again.


Re: Me to You
Reply #3 on: November 17, 2018, 22:21:36
Lovely bit of work, mate. Sounds like a bit of a classic, from an era when melody, guitars and lovers were all in alignment.
before we were all autotuned and rappered into oblivion.
You can be proud of this, mate.


Re: Me to You
Reply #4 on: November 18, 2018, 01:31:33
Hi @Lane   not really good at reviewing other peoples work, but I agree with @eric craptone  in it having a classic sound I don't know if the term "blue eyed soul" is pc any more so I guess I can just say soulful.

Also, @Leonard Scaper brought up a good point about the chorus (and he listens to a lot of music) I don't know how important the chorus is anymore to today's music - some songs don't seem to have one, while others are all chorus. I liked that part in your song.

 I was just reading an article about the way some artists are adapting to the streaming environment, where there is no build up or mood created like in the old CD/Album days, and they just come out swinging from the opening.

Vince


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Re: Me to You
Reply #5 on: November 18, 2018, 07:39:49
Id like a little bit of more adventurous lyrics, personally.
But apart from that small piece of criticism, I like it a lot.
It looks like or sounds like this collaboration works!
Sounds great @Lane !
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Re: Me to You
Reply #6 on: November 18, 2018, 14:32:08
Hi @Lane
It's a very beautiful song, a classic perhaps, very well sung and played by your friend. (Wonderful chorus) 
The lyrics conform perfectly to the style and the sound is well treated.  Good stuff.
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Re: Me to You
Reply #7 on: November 18, 2018, 16:06:11
hi @Lane that sounds like a very soilid song  :ok: :ok: :ok: :ok:

congratulations with this one!  ::headphone:: ::headphone:: ::headphone:: ::headphone::
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Reply #8 on: November 18, 2018, 20:16:37
@Mora Amaro La Loba
@Dutchbeat
@LePlongeur
@Vince
@eric craptone

thanks every one of you, my friend says I can`t get out of the 80`s....lol but I`m an old guy
and  old  guys write old songs.  thats my story and I`m stick`n to it. the real thing is I have so much fun and
all of it keeps me out of trouble. I write these emotional lyrics, and I`m not sad at all, the way the lyric is, you`d think I was a real
crybaby guy,  nope...I guess I just like that genre. this is way more than you all wanted to know i`m sure. anyway have a great day
and thanks so much for commenting and listening.    Lane


Re: Me to You
Reply #9 on: November 19, 2018, 01:50:34
@Lane  Very catchy and well constructed song. Something tells me you`ve been doing this songwriting thing for a while  ;).I liked the bridge, the chorus, and the vocal  ( just a bit  raspy, which gives the song more punch).  The organ is a nice touch.
Very enjoyable !

Robert


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Reply #10 on: November 19, 2018, 04:31:34
@robertkc

Robert, its not one of my "favs, but its ok to have in the folder. I`ve been writing  lyric and music for some time, I always told myself
as soon as I write a "hit I`ll stop this nonsense....lol I have stuff from way back, I`ll drag something out of the past and post it.
thanks for commenting and listening.



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Re: Me to You
Reply #11 on: November 19, 2018, 14:59:12
when I handed this to him, it was just me and a guitar.

I'd love to hear that version.

There's something about a raw demo that really brings out the true nature of a song.


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Re: Me to You
Reply #12 on: November 19, 2018, 20:03:40
« Last Edit: November 19, 2018, 20:34:25 by Lane »
@Leonard Scaper , this is the chorus work for this song, I`ll post a complete song in a few.
some of the lyric is different I think, its from old write. Please forgive the voice" I`m really not a singer.

https://soundcloud.com/user-745253707/chorus-me-to-you


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Re: Me to You
Reply #13 on: November 19, 2018, 20:56:59
Thanks for posting this.

Sorry, my friend.......I hate to have to break it to you like this but you ARE a singer. This simple chorus sounds like YOUR song when you sing it.....not that I don't respect the move to bring in a more golden voice for a "popular" production, though.  ;)

I also respect the concept of swinging in your wheelhouse......yours is obviously songwriting. Both of the works I have heard from you are songs that translated beautifully to the singers who took them on. That, to me, is one sign of a seasoned and talented songwriter.


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Reply #14 on: November 19, 2018, 21:06:00
@Leonard Scaper

thanks so much, all I wanted to be was a songwriter,  had to sing to finish songs. Hey Leonard I`m working on this new
song ..I think it would fit you after hearing that song yesterday, , if you want, I think I have it all written, need to add a little music
once I get that done, i`ll share it, and you can pick it apart, and fix what you think needs to be fixed. we will share...you sing.   lol
it can be  Leonaed/Lane  song if your game. It will take me a day or two to get this where it will make sense to you [music]
and lyric.  let me know i`ll get on it