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Morning Star (New!)
on: March 01, 2018, 12:17:56
https://soundcloud.com/yuriy-shatunski/morning-star

Noise on the streets inside my mind
I feels like treat when meet that nights
But above I see that morning star

Shining bright in little point
Coldest light reminds me toys
What I've lost long time ago 

chorus

Morning star just give me sign
I can't  hide my tears inside
Sing this song with me again
That night

Morning star in darkest sky
Help me pass my wide black line
In your light I see her love again 
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Re: Morning Star (New!)
Reply #1 on: March 02, 2018, 10:56:15
@shatiks  - enjoyed! wonderful gentle ballad. Are you posting to get some specific feedback? Will you publish the lyrics? The atmosphere reminds me a bit of some pieces of The Sandman's Orchestra -
( not member of the forum here, yet) https://soundcloud.com/thesandmansorchestra
recommending https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/How_Music_Works "How music works", book by David Byrne.


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Re: Morning Star (New!)
Reply #2 on: March 02, 2018, 12:01:30
I love reading specific reviews!) Where can I publish lyrics? It has already been published in the same post! You mean the section with lyrics?


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Re: Morning Star (New!)
Reply #3 on: March 03, 2018, 18:09:47
Ah - must have missed it, I was looking at the soundcloud post for lyrics.
"I feels like treat when meet that nights"
that could be
"It feels like a treat when we meet at nights"

in both meanings, very poetic.


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Re: Morning Star (New!)
Reply #4 on: March 03, 2018, 20:25:24
@oorlab
Оnly one sentence? I thought I made a lot more mistakes))) If you make a correction in all the lyrics I will be grateful!


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Re: Morning Star (New!)
Reply #5 on: March 03, 2018, 20:28:19
@shatiks
@oorlab

Your way, or oorlab’s way? I would choose his.
But either way: I really love it.
Job well done kamaradsky!
Kind regards, Gus


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Re: Morning Star (New!)
Reply #6 on: March 03, 2018, 20:49:02
@LePlongeur
Thanks Gus! Be sure to take this into account! But who is  kamaradsky?  ???


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Re: Morning Star (New!)
Reply #7 on: March 03, 2018, 21:16:49
@shatiks  - i guess we are all kamerdskys, or members of the fellowship, or brothers & sisters in music...
here some more pointers:

Shining bright in a little point
Coldest light reminds me of toys
that I've lost a long time ago

chorus

Morning star just give me a sign
I can't  hide my tears inside
Sing this song with me again
That night


Digging your concise lyrics.


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Re: Morning Star (New!)
Reply #8 on: March 03, 2018, 21:43:28
« Last Edit: March 05, 2018, 10:47:55 by LePlongeur »
@LePlongeur
Thanks Gus! Be sure to take this into account! But who is  kamaradsky?  ???

хороший друг

In Dutch: goede vriend
In english: good friend

Keep it up!
Kind regards, Gus



English spelling checker messes up Dutch words....


Re: Morning Star (New!)
Reply #9 on: March 05, 2018, 10:04:34
I like this staring into the sky feeling to it.
Dreamy nice Song. Nice open spacy mix, very good work here , too
I feel it.
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