• My New Music video/song
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My New Music video/song
on: April 30, 2019, 09:58:49
« Last Edit: May 02, 2019, 12:47:57 by Troispr »
Hi

I recently finished writing a song about not wanting to grow up. I would love if you could have a listen and watch my music video, see what you think :)

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Troispr

I Donít Wanna Grow Up:


Well I donít wanna  leave this place
I know nothing will be the same

Iím talking about
This moment in time coz
I donít wanna to say goodbye

I donít wanna grow up up up up up up up
I donít wanna grow up up up up  up up up
I donít wanna grow up

Can I just stay here plz
Stay 20
I love these years
Iím not ready to grow

Up up up ups p up up
i donít wanna grow up up up up up up up
I donít wanna grow up

Think about the late nights and
Free time
Juvenile
Getting High
Loosing time

Donít wanna think about
Stay ins
11pms
Endings
New beginnings
No

I donít wanna grow up up up up up up up
I donít wanna grow up up up up  up up up
I donít wanna grow up

Why why why why

I donít wanna grow up up up up up up up
I donít wanna grow up up up up  up up up
I donít wanna grow up


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Re: My New Music video/song
Reply #1 on: April 30, 2019, 12:26:26
Hi @Troispr , welcome to the kitchen forum  ::thumb:: ::thumb:: ::thumb::

thanks for joining, i hope you will like it out here

I just listened to your song a little (i will listen properly tonight after my day job  ;D ;D ;D ;D), but the song sounds good and your voice is very beautiful  :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:
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Re: My New Music video/song
Reply #2 on: April 30, 2019, 13:58:59
Glad that someone from the shoe gaze/alternative side had joined the Kitchen.
And I like your music a lot, judging from this one. The connection is not stable enough for further exploring journeys, so I hope youíll post something new soon.
Tomorrow a good idea?

We used to have 4 Violins in the house. Why the higher case for violins? Apple magic.
The language is full of double standards. If I donít want to grow up, iím Irresponsible!

Welcome! Be creative! @Troispr
Youíre in good hands here.
Most of the time anyway.
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Re: My New Music video/song
Reply #3 on: April 30, 2019, 14:02:13
Nice song.....and very strong production.  :)

I like the acoustic guitar and you have a very strong voice.

Welcome to The Kitchen. Have a look around at a few threads and see what resonates with you.
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 "In a world of robotic conformity, the only originality left in music is the imperfections" Eric Craptone

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Re: My New Music video/song
Reply #4 on: April 30, 2019, 18:49:12
« Last Edit: April 30, 2019, 18:51:28 by Troispr »
Thank you very much! It's really nice to hear some great feedback!

I will defiantly be looking through the feeds and will be posting again soon I'm sure :)

Thank you also for the warm welcome!

Troispr


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Re: My New Music video/song
Reply #5 on: April 30, 2019, 19:06:32
hi @Troispr
i had a chance to listen and watch your video now properly, after my day job

with headphones and the Volume Up! (Up...Up.. up....;D ;D ;D ;D

fantastic song, very catchy and radiofriendly too, and the vocals are... extremely good in my ears  :o :o :o ::thumb:: ::thumb::
i also like the video, perfect editing
awesome

i hope you take one of our kitchen chairs and make yourself at home here


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Re: My New Music video/song
Reply #6 on: April 30, 2019, 19:43:33
Yes! @Dutchbeat  :)

I really appreciate that! That's so good to hear, thank you!

Great to know all my hard work is paying off! I hope it doesn't get too stuck in your head.

Troispr


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Re: My New Music video/song
Reply #7 on: April 30, 2019, 23:02:12
@Troispr  - Welcome to the kitchen - very nice to have a singer from England joining.
Your song "I don't want to grow up" - sounds very mature :-)
Specially likes for the harmony singing / back vocals.
recommending https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/How_Music_Works "How music works", book by David Byrne.


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Re: My New Music video/song
Reply #8 on: May 01, 2019, 01:53:09
« Last Edit: May 01, 2019, 01:58:53 by Mar T. »
Hi @Troispr , welcome to the kitchen! I loved listening to the gem you posted here and watching the vid along with it. I'm impressed, good job!!

We need this kind of sound / new members in the kitchen. Thank you for joining!

You asked for some general feedback. Well, while listening I wrote down:
-Production by yourself?
-Playing all instruments/sounds yourself?
-Great voice! Nice harmonies! What I love is that is all sounds natural. No pitch corrections, and all I hear is in the acceptable range of pitch correctness. I love human untreated voices (although I experiment with the opposite sometimes, just for fun). I HATE all todays vocal productions on the radio. Way tooo perfect..
-Energy in drums especially in 2nd half of song could be more intense.

That were my first impressions/questions. Imo the song has a strong hook (repeating the 'up' in the lyrics and of course melodically), and this hook helps to 'remember' the song (from the listeners perspective).
I'm a fan!

I hope you're here to share your songs and to share your knowledge about songwriting and production as well. We all learn from each other in the kitchen.
This was an impressive track imo, and I imagined a kitchen campfire with the people who joined this thread, listening to a new creative sound. Always feel free to ask for more specific feedback, we're here to help each other.

Cheers!! (Listening again)..
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Re: My New Music video/song
Reply #9 on: May 01, 2019, 09:24:30
@oorlab Thank you very much. I like the harmonies too :) I love listening to all the different music in the Kitchen from different countries!


@Mar T. Thank you so much for your all your feedback and questions!

My cousin recorded the song for me which was very kind.
All the sounds are completely natural yes, my singing, playing guitar, harmonising.
My cousin added drums and bass which really helps lift the track I think.

Thank you so much for the kind words, it's a song I've been working on for a while and I'm so happy to finally share it and of course impart as much knowledge to the Kitchen too. Very welcoming :)

Troispr


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Re: My New Music video/song
Reply #10 on: May 01, 2019, 13:50:09
This sounds and looks very professional, @Troispr. The vocals are extremely pleasing, and I find the music & melody appealing. Lovely harmonies and backing vocals, adding depth.
(I might hint that as a lyricist, I - and others - enjoy reading the lyrics along with a video. ;) )

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Re: My New Music video/song
Reply #11 on: May 01, 2019, 15:37:02
welcome to the Kitchen @Troispr ... you might be surprised to discover that most of us older ones also don't want to grow up ;-)

As @DonMar said above, If you could post your lyrics it's always helpful, especially for those who don't have English as their first language. Also for Donna, as a lyricist, it's her 'bread and butter' so to speak. 

If you are looking for inspiration here then I'd recommend digging into @Leonard Scaper's work for starters, as somebody who has written so many songs, about so many subjects. There are many different ears on this forum so if you want to test the water with stuff, it's definitely the place to be.

It's always nice to get another guitarist on here. Do you use altered tunings at all ?  Have you any  obvious influences ? Have you thought about trying the looping kt tunstall type of performance ?

As regards your song and video, it feels an 'organic performance' which is always important for a singer /songwriter.  The truth always comes from within and the 'art' is getting it out.




 
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Re: My New Music video/song
Reply #12 on: May 02, 2019, 12:55:32
Thanks @DonMar  and @MrBouzouki - I have no added my lyrics :)

I am going to look through @Leonard Scaper work now. Looking through people's lyrics is defiantly very inspiring.

Thanks for the questions!
I do use DADGAD sometimes or drop D, not for this particular song though.
Typically, I am influenced by a multitude of genres and artists, I was brought up around traditional folk music though.
I have never used a loop pedal as it happens, I'd love to play around with one. Some people have an amazing talent for them!





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