Neal Alexander- Winch (Lyric Video)

New song I recently finished. This one touches on addiction. I don't know but this track just hits different. Possible hit?  Really happy with how it turned out. Here's the lyric video and visualizer. Music video in the works!

Hola @Neal Alexander

It has been a very nice experience watching and listening!!!! Very pleasant.Mora

@Neal   you should be very happy with it, it's very well done. Radio friendly 3min and 18 sec.  A hit ...... who knows, it's up to the gate keepers

 

V,

Definitely a Hit @Neal. It hits all the right spots…. The sense of sharing one’s personal struggle comes across in your clear, controlled emotional delivery.

Well produced, simple, only what’s needed and nothing more… Jack Johnson wishes he could write and sing like this 

@Neal ......... I agree with the above sentiments.....especially what @1roomstudio said about Jack Johnson.

Very smooth and memorable tune.

@Neal great track. Clarify of production is right up there - not sure where you did track, but its super-polished and ready for action. This is super-accomplished worl.

Pace and guitar appegio really drive whole thing along. I would have maybe added another instrument to the arrangement as the song progressed - or maybe even an acoustic solo of some kind.

I hear songs like this and think 'blimey I've got work to do to catch up' :-)

Carl

Thank you everyone for checking out the song. Really appreciate it!
@Mora Amaro La Loba
@Vince
@1roomstudio
@Leonard Scaper
@CarlDavies

@Neal  . . . oh yes, really well done, modern vibe, simple to the point lyrically . . . and very well recorded, kind of close up, intimate to the listener, and the video portrays that as well . . . I think a break in the vocal flow with a very brief solo section (probably acoustic guitar, just like the intro)  could really help the overall song idea as it flows along, just an idea for some extra punch musically . . . you vocals are excellent.

I hope we will hear this on the radio soon!

Hello neal,

first of all - I really enjoyed listening to the track, and watching the video. For me the best proof that sometimes less is more. I think the video is great - simple but very effective.

To the text I can not write much now, unfortunately, because the English language is not my hobbyhorse. However, I can write something about the music. Not much but enough to express what I think - brilliant, great, it does not get better. Nothing is missing, nothing disturbs - that's how it has to be.

But I have a small point of criticism, which I may express once. But here it is only about my subjective taste, and does not have to mean anything. The backing vocals that you sing yourself (the repetitions of some words, so to speak) could for my taste be a little further back in the background. Otherwise, the vocals are really strong, and your voice sounds great.

Yes, - the part is definitely radio suitable. 

Greetings

Charly

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