• New Day New vibes - Split screen video
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New Day New vibes - Split screen video
on: April 28, 2021, 13:45:59
« Last Edit: April 29, 2021, 20:15:06 by muso1070 »
Hello everyone

I have a new version of an old ballad I wrote many years back.
As per usual I plan on recording this song soon, a new stripped back approach I think I'll stay with but if you have a moment to check it out thanks a lot in advance and any feedback or ideas are most welcome  :D

Thanks



Lyrics

Oh I would like to watch the sun go down
And the day turns to night and the stars all come out
Just the way the wind blows on the mountain side
And the grass yeah it grows just like my love for you

And time is all it takes when you make a mistake
And I know cause I've been and I've seen how it goes
But it's ok because it's a new day and the clouds are away
And you keep on smiling because you've been driving on an open road

Oh I would like to stay here all night and the waves breaking through
yeah they spray in my eyes
Just the way it goes when your walking on the sand
And I know yeah its cold I can feel it on your hands

And time is all it takes when you make a mistake
And I know cause I've been and I've seen how it goes
But it's ok because it's a new day and the clouds are away
And you keep on smiling because you've been driving on an open road

Oh I would like to watch the sun go down
And the day turns to night and the stars all come out
Just the way the wind blows on the mountain side
And the grass yeah it grows just like my love for you



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Re: New Day New vibes - Split screen video
Reply #1 on: April 28, 2021, 20:39:08
@muso1070  - sounds and looks good. Your brother and you did a fine recording. Did you or will you post the lyrics somehwere? Might help when someone wants to offer detailed tips. Comparing "Waiting for the sun" and "New day" - the latter has a bit higher volume for the vocals. Just a difference I noticed. Off course totally unrelated to the songwriting in itself.
Good luck with the recording!


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Re: New Day New vibes - Split screen video
Reply #2 on: April 29, 2021, 20:14:03
@muso1070  - sounds and looks good. Your brother and you did a fine recording. Did you or will you post the lyrics somehwere? Might help when someone wants to offer detailed tips. Comparing "Waiting for the sun" and "New day" - the latter has a bit higher volume for the vocals. Just a difference I noticed. Off course totally unrelated to the songwriting in itself.
Good luck with the recording!

Hey thank you haha  ;D
Oh yes I forgot to add the lyrics. Posting below now thanks.


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Reply #3 on: April 29, 2021, 20:14:37
Lyrics

Oh I would like to watch the sun go down
And the day turns to night and the stars all come out
Just the way the wind blows on the mountain side
And the grass yeah it grows just like my love for you

And time is all it takes when you make a mistake
And I know cause I've been and I've seen how it goes
But it's ok because it's a new day and the clouds are away
And you keep on smiling because you've been driving on an open road

Oh I would like to stay here all night and the waves breaking through
yeah they spray in my eyes
Just the way it goes when your walking on the sand
And I know yeah its cold I can feel it on your hands

And time is all it takes when you make a mistake
And I know cause I've been and I've seen how it goes
But it's ok because it's a new day and the clouds are away
And you keep on smiling because you've been driving on an open road

Oh I would like to watch the sun go down
And the day turns to night and the stars all come out
Just the way the wind blows on the mountain side
And the grass yeah it grows just like my love for you


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Re: New Day New vibes - Split screen video
Reply #4 on: May 17, 2021, 17:46:45
Hi @muso1070
I love ballads and yours is so nice and reassuring.
What a lovely folky song ::headphone::

Thank you for the video, I had the impression to be at your private concert
Nice work


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Reply #5 on: May 20, 2021, 13:12:43
Hi @muso1070
I love ballads and yours is so nice and reassuring.
What a lovely folky song ::headphone::

Thank you for the video, I had the impression to be at your private concert
Nice work

Hey nice to hear from you thank you  ;D
Having a lot of fun working on a new studio version for this song which is coming together real nice for the use in publishing.
Bit different from this stripped back live version.
Hope to share sometime in future.

Thanks