• New Demo " Village's Story " - feedbacks needed
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Hey ! I've just got my exam today, so I thought I would share an other demo. It's called "Village's Story" and it's very british   :)


       


By the way, I have scheduled to record an EP in August/September. I think that song will be in there. Hope the recording process will go well  ::thumb::


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Re: New Demo " Village's Story " - feedbacks needed
Reply #1 on: July 06, 2016, 17:21:16
Oh and don't hesitate to tell if you think the sound is too low !  :)


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Re: New Demo " Village's Story " - feedbacks needed
Reply #2 on: July 09, 2016, 16:01:52
Hello Lubeck, the sound is too low! ;D ;D ;D
And I agree it is very british. All in all I like it. Looking forward too hear a proper version which is not too low, ;D ;D and which is a bit better rehearsed.
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Re: New Demo " Village's Story " - feedbacks needed
Reply #3 on: July 10, 2016, 00:49:25
To underpin it: the sound is too low.

I think I like the song....but the guitar really is not doing it for me. I would really tend to think to set it up like a classic british guitar pop one. without acoustic guitar.

One recommendation ..... leave the "hfffftt" you do with your voice when you take a breath....:D



Re: New Demo " Village's Story " - feedbacks needed
Reply #4 on: July 10, 2016, 04:53:26
I don't know if anyone mentioned before...

But...

Sorry to say this...

Noone seems to have noticed....

The Sound Is Too LOW!

 ::Suzy::


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Re: New Demo " Village's Story " - feedbacks needed
Reply #5 on: July 11, 2016, 03:44:09
I THINK THE SOUND IS WAY TOO  low


Re: New Demo " Village's Story " - feedbacks needed
Reply #6 on: July 11, 2016, 19:45:10
sounds pretty good, i like the strummy feel but not sure on the lyrics cant tell what your singing, maybes as its too low doesnt help, would help if you posted those and sing those vocals with a bit oomph like you mean it, sounds like your a bit bored haha!
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