• New song: Daydreaming
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New song: Daydreaming
on: June 02, 2019, 19:59:22
Hi Mates,

I've made my first (kind of) balade:
https://soundcloud.com/jellody/daydreaming-feat-matt-sky-demo

The meaning of the song:
Our lives are a ratrace, we don't have any time for daydreaming. And that's what I want right now.

Thank you for the feedback in advance!! :)

--- lyrics ---

- Couplet -
Busy days, too much to say
Life is a ratrace anyway
The things we love
Deep in our heart
Where is the time
To forget it all

- Chorus -
Daydreaming, is all that I want
Daydreaming, dream about how it was



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Re: New song: Daydreaming
Reply #1 on: June 02, 2019, 23:28:51
Hey @Jellody , thank you for sharing this gem.. This was a week of miracles for me, and 'dreams' was the central theme. So I just HAD to listen to this beauty and I don't regret..
Lovely how the tempo of the words of the verses come at a rather high speed and I can feel it 'lands' in that chorus. Niiicee catchy tune!
Love that octave harmony above the 1st voice, nice effect!
Overall it sounds dreamy to me, so consider your message delivered, at least to me!
Well done, enjoyed listening!

Love, peace and cheers!
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Re: New song: Daydreaming
Reply #2 on: June 03, 2019, 03:03:23
Nice song @JedLong

When I read the lyrics I wondered how such few words could create a song but you've been very creative with repetition and building layers, which keeps everything interesting.

cheers


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Re: New song: Daydreaming
Reply #3 on: June 03, 2019, 03:31:40
« Last Edit: June 03, 2019, 03:34:01 by LePlongeur »
You are not going to believe it, but I found that I was daydreaming at night and decided to look what's happening in the Kitchen.
And I'm not disappointed.
I like your daydreaming very much, @Jellody
Very very much even.
Kind regards, Gus


Re: New song: Daydreaming
Reply #4 on: June 03, 2019, 12:18:19
Hi @Jellody

It is seen that romanticism flies over our forum. Congratulations, beautiful song.
I did not know that to live I had to die so many times
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Re: New song: Daydreaming
Reply #5 on: June 08, 2019, 00:08:43
Love it. Nice sound you have created here. The simple clean guitar complements the processed vocals perfectly. Very cool.

Dan


Re: New song: Daydreaming
Reply #6 on: June 08, 2019, 04:13:45
Oh wow this is amazing. The vocals are so smooth.


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Re: New song: Daydreaming
Reply #7 on: June 11, 2019, 17:44:43
Thanks for the comments all!! It sounds very positive  :)


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Re: New song: Daydreaming
Reply #8 on: June 11, 2019, 17:52:01
hi @Jellody

sorry for being late to this party....this song sounds awesome  :o :o :o :o :o

NICE, super NICE this  ::headphone:: ::headphone:: ::headphone::

the vocals sound good, and so does the music  :yes: :yes: :yes:

in the fade out.....i like to suggest to put the vocals louder, keep them as loud as they were, they drop back in volume too abrupt..ly.. ish in my opinion

great song
me, myself, and Pie



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