• New song: Energy
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New song: Energy
on: May 11, 2019, 17:22:01
Hi mates,

I'm busy finishing my new song 'Energy'. I'm curious what you think about it! :)

Here are the lyrics:

- Lyrics -

When the darkest clouds come down
And you couldn't be around
I feel your energy, we're not enemies
Letís meet up again somehow

When the rain begins to fall
And then you realize we had it all
I want your energy, weíre not enemies
Letís dance and forget it now

- Chorus -
Energy, I want your energy, energy now
Energy, I want your energy, energy now

When your darkest day begins
And you promise yourself to win
You want my energy, that activity
Let's dance and start the sing

When the rain begins to fall
And then you realize we had it all
I want your energy, weíre not enemies
Letís dance and forget it now

- Bridge -

When the night is over
I'm just thinking of you
We're not enemies
I only want your energy yeah baby

Thank you so much!! :)

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Re: New song: Energy
Reply #1 on: May 12, 2019, 14:03:38
This is a seriously catchy tune! The way you build the dynamics really works. Great positive lyrics.
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Re: New song: Energy
Reply #2 on: May 14, 2019, 11:09:18
 Hi @Jellody

Nice track, nice sound, nice voice and very good construction of the song.
Joking a little, you seem a vampire... of energy
I did not know that to live I had to die so many times
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Re: New song: Energy
Reply #3 on: May 21, 2019, 12:54:07
@Jellody hello! Energy is a powerful influence and your song touches on something a lot don't think about. You have a soothing voice. Sound and structure are very appealing. Nice!!
Do what makes your heart sing :)

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Re: New song: Energy
Reply #4 on: May 24, 2019, 01:03:14
Hi @Jellody

What I like about this site and listening to songs for review is that I get to listen to the types of songs that I would never listen to otherwise.

This song is a good example, where I wouldn't get to hear it or songs like this normally. It's not my sort of thing, yet, I find myself enjoying it (so maybe be I need to open my eyes/ears a little more!).

It's a great melody and very very catchy. You also have a fantastic pure voice which really suits this song.

Very nice


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Re: New song: Energy
Reply #5 on: May 24, 2019, 08:16:51
@Leonard Scaper  Thanks mate!  :ok:

@Mora Amaro La Loba  Haha, yes It's a lot of energy  ;D

@Kellyanneg Thanks for your comment, great to hear!

@Jurgen Thanks for your nice comment! This forum is a good place to change your taste of music :) hihi

Re: New song: Energy
Reply #6 on: May 25, 2019, 19:51:40
@Jellody This song reminded me how irresistable good electronic pop is when done well. Good upbeat lyrics, lots of care put into the sructure and arrangement... above all a very good lead vocal.
I like that ending too (hearing a hint of Peter Gabriel in the energy on this ;).
Well done!


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Re: New song: Energy
Reply #7 on: May 31, 2019, 21:05:23
Hi @Jellody ... echoes of Dancing in the Dark in that intro" a bit

Vocally very smooth, this works well as the instrumentation sounds smooth too so it blends nicely.
Despite that all the Vox is super clear which is a trap many people fall into, burying their Vox in the mix.
You can hear every single word in this track which helps the message getting across.
As @robertkc said good ending too.

Good Job

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Re: New song: Energy
Reply #8 on: June 11, 2019, 18:42:43
Hi @Jellody ,

This is the first song of yours that I'm listening to. I loved it! I really like your style! :) Sounds fresh and contemporary.... brings to mind vibes of Coldplay/ Imagine Dragons/ Owl city in a good way.

Looking forward to listen more of your tracks,
Rachel  ::Rachel::

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