• (New song) Lucky Charm
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(New song) Lucky Charm
on: December 15, 2018, 04:08:57
Hey guys, I recorded a new song and I would appreciate any input and feedback!!!

https://soundcloud.com/liam-orourke-391160567/lucky-charm


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Re: (New song) Lucky Charm
Reply #1 on: December 15, 2018, 10:41:52
Hi @Mr Liam - my first comment is that I'd lose some of the reverb.

I'm listening on phones at the moment so that might intensify the effect but I'm hearing but it seems to add a a real 'bloom' to the Vox and
makes the words less distinctive. It sounds an introspective song so needs to sound more up-close and personal IMHO .

You have a good voice so lets hear it nice and clear.  ::thumb::

The acoustic guitar sounds good and sits well relative to the Vox so that's a plus. I quite like the string noises as it gives it an authentic feel like you've just sat down next to somebody and started playing.

It's a nice solo but just a tad loud. It's loose style fits the mood of the song

Good Job

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Re: (New song) Lucky Charm
Reply #2 on: December 16, 2018, 17:07:38
hi @Mr Liam what a nice song, i enjoyed listening to  it very much.

You have a very pleasant voice, sounds good to me   ::thumb:: ::thumb:: ::thumb::

i agree with @MrBouzouki that the guitar solo is a tad loud in the mix

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Re: (New song) Lucky Charm
Reply #3 on: December 16, 2018, 18:42:33
It's a very good song. The chorus brings the message across nicely and that "lucky charm will be by your side" line is a real hook.

Don't worry too much about the mix and production stuff......unless you are looking for specific tips on that. The song itself is a winner.
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Re: (New song) Lucky Charm
Reply #4 on: December 16, 2018, 22:15:35
I definitely agree with @Leonard Scaper it's a good song ... @Mr Liam

I should really have said that in my last post   :doublebonk:

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Re: (New song) Lucky Charm
Reply #5 on: December 17, 2018, 01:42:43
I enjoyed the laid back pop/folk feel you bring to this song@Mr Liam  Good melody and your warm vocals are the highlight.

Robert



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